These were pretty good overall. I liked the first one the most. My only criticism I guess is that it felt like you were trying to make political points about abortion and elder case (ch2, ch3, respectively). Chap. 2 came off as if you are rabidly pro-life, and some of the hyperbole is annoying. I doubt everyone would share this particular pet peeve, but the last place I want to see that is in WWZ fanfic.

Chapter 3 saw many paragraphs about nothing but abstract philosophical ideas behind euthanasia and how modern society just kind of forgets old people. That's fine and all, but maybe as a very short paragraph and not multiple long ones. This chapter seemed pretty light with actual Z material, compared to the others.

Anyway other than that it was good stuff

My only complaint, is that this story should be rated T or M due to the language. other than that, I'm in love. awesome job

The next time a Planned Parenthood clinic is blown up, or a doctor is gunned down while attending church, I'm going to remember reading this.

Wishy-washy Protestant? I'll have you know you heretical idolatrous...never mind.

very mature and well-thought out, but separating it into several chapters (several "accounts" can be in one chapter and vice-versa) would make it more readable

I'm not sure about the quisling being so inoffensive. Apart from that, well done: I think this is the best WWZ fanfiction I have read so far!

I like how you managed to portray the issue abortion in the context of World War Z and how you referenced Breck Scott and North Korea.

I like how you managed to write the story in a very detailed way. I also liked how you managed to describe how they survived an undead siege in a plausible way and I'm actually surprised that the main character didn't fall for the Phalanx ruse.
Very well-written story. I hope you write more.

Just read both of the chapters you have so far, and they are so well written. Just really enjoy the medical side of your story as it was lacing in the original book. I would love to read more povs as to different aspects of the medical community as they went through the war, maybe even a CDC like place too? Anyway it really is wonderful ff and I am waiting for more

Love the 2 chapters so far! Amazing please write more :-) thank you!

This was beautifully handled and wonderfully written. Your perspective of medicine, on the oath to do no harm, on personal moral and religious codes and even on the horrible choices people had to make were all unbelievably well done. I loved this story and I feel like you really managed to capture the essence of an innately conflicted person who was put in a very bad situation and had to fight to try and stay alive and sane. I can't wait to read more!

Still reading it, but I like so far. The best thing is how you've built up a strong and consistent narrative voice. Hope you do more.

Nice, what was Solanum by the way? And you made mistake in Saying India and Pakistan it was Iran and Pakistan that nuked each other.

Very good, thanks!

Really well- written and an interesting approach to the Quislings. The only mistake i could find was regarding the nuclear exchange : as i remember it, it was between Iran an Pakistan, not India and Pakistan. Other than that, it was a really good ww fanfic :-) I would love to see future chapters with different PoV.