Thank you for a great story!

I predict it’s the cat! The cat is an animagus! Ok i may be just taking a wild guess but I’d love and hate to be right

I’ve just found this and read through the whole lot.
I’ve read another of your works “the shadow” and I loved it. I love this. I like ve the way you write and your vision of how harry and Severus would interact. I do hope you update. I hate reading brilliant stories that wrap me up into their pages, where nothing else matters, to only find it’s not complete, or updated. Thank you for your talent. I think you write beautifully

Either "Mr Monster" is somebody trusted by Harry, or he used a Muggle device to pin the note from a distance, by arrow or something, without crossing the wards personally.
Sorrell is Severus's Animagus form, right?
Severed human hand, whose?
If Harry's magic cannot work in this room, but Joshua's can... What about getting Joshua to inhale some of the imperius substance, and then "commanding" Joshua to lower the wards, to send Patronus to Severus Snape, to keep Harry alive and healthy, to give himself [Joshua] up to the police/Aurors?
Can Harry use Legilimency on Joshua? Can Harry turn into an Animagus? Can Harry do some kind of blood magic? Harry has to remember the wards that are being used here, and the weaknesses of the wards. Can Hedwig find Harry? Can Severus's Patronus lead Severus to Harry? Ron and Hermione might have heard from Harry that it's how Harry found Severus.
Thank you. Good day, good night, and good luck.

Omg your story is amazing! Please update soon.

Wow! This scene is very intense! I can't wait to see what Severus does. Will he let others know about him and Harry? I'm thinking no, but when emotions are running high and one is worried sick, who knows?

Thank you very much for the update!

I like this story. It's an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter.

short chapter...

yea... stressful...
now we know the bad guy...
good

Just finished reading this through. I absolutely love it. Love how it's so different than most other stories. Love the suspense! The only thing I don't love is the number of "F" bombs dropped. They're completely unnecessary and add absolutely nothing useful to the dialogue. Just my humble opinion, of course.

Would love to read more regardless.

I can't wait for the climax of this story, I'm super excited. Thank for the update!

I just recently started reading this and I couldn't put it down! I love a good mystery and this story definitely fits the bill. I've never been a huge fan of this particular pairing but it works well here. I can't wait to find out what happens next.

OMG the pictures. That's so creepy!

Thanks for the update!

aaaaaahhh!

o.k.. stressful...
I think.. the that it was the cat...
awesome!

I really like this story. It's an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter.

I love your story! So unique. I don't think I've read anything quite like it. So many mysteries...you've got me puzzled. Really hope you're able to keep updating!