Poor Amy had to suffer through that loss alone. I'm glad Jimmy was there for her and it does explain why he's being so careful and protective now. I'm glad that she finally told Shelby and was able to get it off of her chest. It was sweet of her to offer to be a surrogate for Shelby, though how about you get through your current pregnancy before you worry about another one.

Good job and thanks for sharing.

Lovely chapter :)

Powerful chapter. Update soon.

More amazing work.

Love it

cute!

Who doesn't love a day of fun at a theme park with friends? I think it would be good for Rachel to join the Cheerios or the track team. It was nice of Quinn to suggest they run together. I like that Rachel is spreading her wings a bit.

Noah is being very sweet and gentle with Rachel. I think he's got a bit of a crush on her. I like them together as they have a history and he's very protective of her. I enjoy descent, caring Noah. What's up with Amy? Is she just hormonal or is something else going on?

Good job and thanks for sharing.

thanks for the update!

So this version of Rachel didn’t grow up singing and dancing right? Will you be exploring more of that side to her as she goes on? Loving the puckleberry parts

Interesting. Why is Amy visiting? Update soon.

As always another awesome update! Really happy to see an update on a Tuesday it was a great surprise to see the notification! Keep up the fantastic writing! Can’t wait for the next one!

Loving it.

Vacation ideas for the future, if possible. Washington D.C. Some parts of the South. Atlanta, maybe some of Florida.

Love it. I wonder will Rachel so angry

great chapter! i've been super busy so only just got a chance to read sorry but i loved it

Mackenzie...you do realize that there are other countries besides the USA? I am assuming here, but I’m pretty sure the author isn’t American. Her sentence structure is perfectly fine. It’s like how in MA we say soda, but down South they say pop. Neither is right or wrong, just different.