nice

i noticed your name is nejifan7272.I read the story and i cummed hard. but ur name sickens me. why would name yourself after such a douche

Naruto so idiot.
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I give Hinata's first kiss to another person, stupid.

Just gonna day to the last two guys who posted paragraphs about how Naruto doesn’t need to use hypnosis to get girls, I know. It’s not that I don’t think he can, it’s that I wanted to write a story like this. I like naruto and I have a hypno fetish, that’s literally my entire inspiration for this story, y’all are putting way too much thought into it, lol.

Well really, for girls he DOESN'T need hypnosis for there are: Sakura (I think he could hit that if he just TRIED), ino (she seems to wanna be with ANYONE powerful), hinata(obviously), amiru(naruto movie: bonds), koyuki(naruto movie: clash in the land of snow), Shion(she actually asks him to give her children. Naruto the FIRST movie), temari(she can't believe he beat her brother and then restored him to her and the village as a normal person), Iseribi(the fish girl from filler that's A LOT like him), The diyamo from the land of birds (she got her moral code back by him and he brought her brother's killer to light), the orange haired girl from rice country *name escapes me*(he helped her out, she betrayed him, felt horrible about it and then he turns around and helps her with her clan's problems), Fuu (fellow jinchuriki and probably about starved for an actual connection), Anko (after he PROVES he's a badass, by beating pein, I doubt she'd have a problem), mei temuri (she just seems "man hungry" especially if they are STRONG), Karin(she was nearly orgasmic from the size of naruto's chakra whenever she was around him). There are several more, but that's what I remembered off the top of my head. He really doesn't NEED hypnosis, just to stop being such a COWARD when it comes to women! He can rush HEAD-LONG into battle with completely UNBEATABLE odds and win, but in the face of GIRLS/WOMEN he becomes a MOUSE and his tactics for even attempting them are what a SCHOOL-BOY would slap his hand to his head over!

You know, from what I've seen of the girls/women of the naruto-verse, Naruto really doesn't NEED "hypnosis" at all. He's a rich, extremely famous across the elemental nations, badass that also isn't hard on the eyes. So... Really all he has to do is "MAN UP" and he could get all the girls that he could with hypnosis anyway! As far as the villagers still disliking him? Offer NOT to save anyone anymore OR slap a few around sometime! Either they'll come around and REALLY want him around OR they'll be too terrified of him to scowl anyway! (either way, again NO hypnosis needed, just the willingness too SACK UP!)

Sorry to hear that you'll no longer be writing this fanfic. I thought that it was a really good story

not really a shock that your not writing on here any more and somewhere else.

The link is a little funky, although you may have spaced it out deliberately. The quotation marks are empty.

Oh yeah my duck is very very happy about this

Great job

please updarte

[Jimryu] The Magic Crystal

it's bin about a year and 5 months; nearly 1.5 years since the last update! y u no update?!

Wouldn't he be the last of 3 clans as mito uzumaki was married to hashirama senju, the first hokage, and she was a relative of Kushina, so Naruto is technically the heir to the Uzumaki, Senju, and Namikaze. So he could have 6 wives