Reviews for Melancholia
VampireFrootloopsRule chapter 1 . 11/16/2012
This was a cute little fic! I liked it a lot, it just seemed so sincere, yaknow?
paracuties chapter 1 . 11/14/2012
Wow...that's just so good. You always complete these one-shots so well! It ends just perfectly, and is just the right length, and...well, they're always awesome. Keep writing!
Kina Kalamari chapter 1 . 11/14/2012
That was amazing. Amazing in a way that I can't really articulate, unfortunately. Just the whole aftermath, pick-each-other-up idea of it... Brilliant. Very nice. :]
ViolaHarmony chapter 1 . 11/14/2012
Very nice one-shot. It's very realistic and in-character. I don't think the boys ever meant to shut Winry out, they just didn't want to burden her with all their nightmares. (My grandpa was a World War II veteran and he absolutely hated talking about his experiences. He would get angry whenever his kids asked about it. I don't think his secrecy came from lack of trust; he just didn't want to burden his loved ones and revisit memories he'd rather forget.) But after the Promised Day, I think they needed a talk like this. It would help the boys and their relationship with Winry. It would also help Winry understand them better and know how to help them. I shall put this story in my head cannon. :)
Heartless demon wolf chapter 1 . 11/13/2012
Very, very impressive on-shot I seriously enjoyed it, I'm relly glad they are tryint to get some closure or redeem for their sins, but Nina was none of their faults so I'm stil not sure why they are stressed about it...still, they are slowly moving on