Love this! Great job with the dialogue, description, and characters! Of course I would like for it to continue... but good job on this one-shot! Could you write some more like this?

I love this

Interesting promt you got. Poor Dean, he doesn't deserve to deal with the crap.
I do have to say though, that I didn't really dig your portrayal of an asthma attack. I know that it's different for everyone but you usually don't get chest pains/collapsing/etc right away and lying down is the last thing you'd wanna do. (Why were they not keeping Dean's torso elevated? That makes it easier to breath. ;D)

This was so descriptive there were actually a couple times it felt like it was hard to breathe haha. Really well done, I love the role reversal at the end of Sam being the one to look out for Dean for a change. And I always like the rare stories where John is portrayed as a good guy, so that was very refreshing. Great fic!

beautiful. love it!

Wow. Great story.

interesting I can't wait to see what happens next.

Nice. :)

I loved how you had that clear parallel at the end - "Yeah, dad, you know I will."

I'm guessing begu was asthma? I'd love to see a follow up to this; how our hunters deal with this change.

Great work! I loved the huge helping of comfort. :)

Bundi.

Very good story!

Awww poor Dean!...I love to read caring John and Sammy actually happened to Dean?Is he asmathic?I thought there is gonna be a second you'll write more hurt/sick Dean for me.