Sorry, I'm just imagining Ratchet and Clank with their sizes reversed, and you wouldn't believe how funny I find it. It's pretty great.

so, any hope of an update for this story soon?

Very cool story, I find it impressive that you have made a universe which is close to being completely original content. Will Shepard see previous team members as AI like he was? In ME3 Liara was not planning on leaving only one information cache for the next cycle so I was wondering if you would use that as an opportunity to bring a member of the previous team or even a previous antagonist in? *cough* Timmy *cough*

P.S. Is it only me that imagines a cross breed of Sangheili and Kig-Yar when thinking of how the Drakat/Ar'alee are described?

Remember, Honey Badgers do not care.

Wtf is camp NaNo?

This fic is just so god damn awesome.

Lots of action, but who really gives a sht about any of these people? Shepard lacks motivation. Has he a goal? Maybe oh, I don't know, see if he can clone some humans?

Hey, just finished reading your story.
It's a cool idea in a direction that not too many stories went for, and for that you deserve praise.

However, I did have some things that either didn't make sense to me, or felt not as polished as they could have been. I suppose I should have reviewed earlier, but here it is anyway.

I'll start at the beginning:

A. AI Shep was put inside a computer with Legion and Liara's recordings. Shepard is not famous for his tactical genius or scientific ingenuity, rather he is an exemplary soldier who excels in *doing* things on the ground and inspiring others.

Considering this, why stick him in a stationary computer?
A custom made mobile Geth platform, or better, a refined version of EDI's android body would make much more sense.

B. When AI Shep woke up, we saw for a moment his true AI side, but then conveniently it was swept aside in the favor of a "human simulation". What is the point of using AI Shep if he acts most of the time exactly like a human anyway? He should be more... Alien and AI-like.
As it is, you could have just used Cryo-Stasis and froze Shepard, or used a clone.

C. Why Legion and Not a copy of EDI? EDI is much more "mature" than Legion when it comes to understanding organics. I would wager that she is also far more useful when it comes to electronic warfare, given that she was made specifically for it. I also think that her personality is more interesting, but that's just my opinion.

D. The relative power difference between the cycles, and the inevitability of space magic and Deus Ex Machina in order to solve it. The current Cycle sucks hard when it comes to technology, the seven years that are left are not realistically enough to rectify that. That simply seems to lead the story into a corner, a corner which you as the writer can get away from only by repeating the same Space-Magic style ending of ME3. That's, rather concerning to me.

E. Shepard. How should I say this? Shepard is simply not very impressive when it comes to his performance, considering that he is "the best that humanity had to offer" and the fact that he is an AI with a body of metal. Where is the supreme reaction time of an AI? Where are the tech prowess and the ability to hack any lesser electronics? Where is the close combat absolute superiority of an AI type Android? Where are the trick shots and the ability to analyze the battlefield and form plans in the blink of an eye?
Again, Shepard comes off as an organic, and not a very impressive one either.

F. Original characters and original races. Personally I found it somewhat difficult to keep order with all the names of characters and races and how they are supposed to look. From time to time I find myself not really remembering who some of the characters are, their race, and general description.

I simply feel that you added a mass of new original characters in a short time, without giving the readers enough time to adjust and actually remember them and find all the little stories that make each of them unique and alive.

I can't remember anything else at this point.

So thanks for writing, and I hope that you won't see my review as some kind attack.

It's good to see this story is going on! :)

I streetu with you El'e looks like a fun character to write.

Now this was interesting. El'e is actually doing pretty well, and while she thinks she's unready, all the worthwhile ones always think they are. It is going to be an interesting AAR when Shepard gets back, that's for sure, as she will focus on her mistakes and not consider her successes.

great way to get attention :)

this is by far the best T rated ME fanfic there is. i really hope your still working on this

Shepard will smash through everything... but he should get upgrade, like Legion lol

this is an interesting concept, I wonder how it will play out?