I'll admit, I enjoy the idea of this story, and your writing quality is excellent, but... I'm really struggling to read this. It is highly disorienting for at the absolute minimum a third of every chapter to be italicized. I have no problem with first person narration, one of my favorite book series was written that way, but italics are completely unnecessary outside of the stream sequence in this chapter (which was absurdly long and I skipped almost all of it). The italics make it feel like the entire story is just one giant flashback and I keep instinctively wondering when the real story is actually going to start, despite knowing that's not what's going on. Writing style conveys things, and non emphatic uses of italics are usually reserved to letters, flashbacks, and dreams, so am entire story written in them is legitimately hurting my brain. I'm going to finish up the remaining chapters and follow the story unless something static happens, but I really hope if and when you pick this up again, you'll take my advice into account.

There is no O in the company Rect Progress

Is this before kirito was imprisoned by sugou?

Man this is great, to bad its dead :(. Thanks for the reading though!

why tf would you create a summary chapter

Good chapter. I knew Sleeping Knights made their debut as soon as I saw Merida. I just knew the Cat Sith guy had to be Clovis. The idea that nine members of Sleeping Knights are representing the nine races of Alfheim is pretty good. I myself thought Ran would have been an Undine since unless my memory is failing me original Ran is a sea goddess from Norse mythology. But unfortunately for us volume 7 of LN repeatedly implied that Sleeping Knights were new to Alfheim. But I’m still looking forward to seeing how this scenario will play out. Keep up the good work.

I love this story, and going to reread it now.

Absolutely stunned by the amazing story you got going on here. I'm looking forward to seeing more of It. In retrospect I knew the work would be high quality after reading the kirita chronicled first which brings me to enjoy the fact that you brought Delana and Wan Shotto to this story as well. The fact that this is an Asuna focused story was a nice change of pace after everything I've seen here. Keep up the great work.
-AK

I really love what you have done with this story thus far and look forward to what's next in the (hopefully) upcoming you for making a enjoyable story.

I always come back to this story when I have nothing else to read. That's how good this is.

It's a really good story!
Hoping for a reboot!

Will you ever update this story? :c
It's my favorite sao fanfic, please don't abadon it, more than two years have passed already since the last update. D:

You my fellow writer, are a life saver. You have such long chapters, I'm highly envious. I'm actually in the middle of the Kirita Chronicles right now as well, and when searching for something, I was caught by the summary and total words! I was a chapter in before I noticed "Fairy Dance Alternate" from your Omakes! I know it's highly likely you won't see this, but it makes me glad to have told you!

pLEASE WRITE MORE!

A few minor issues, but all in all, a very well written piece. I approve :)