Thank you for this story. It was beautiful, and sad, and oh, so well-written. And it kept me guessing right till the end. Writing it through the prism of Molly's insecurities made it so that I felt just as insecure. It was brilliant !

awww :) that was wonderful :)

Aww, just read both chapters of this, and really enjoyed it. You did a great job of explaining Molly's nervousness, the thoughts behind it etc. And I loved/really felt for her misunderstanding of John's platonic love for Sherlock, thinking it was something else and that he would leave her for him. Such a sweet twist.

I felt like crying with Molly in this chapter! D: This is the best Jolly fanfiction I've read so far! XD I wish you added more, but all great stories must come to an end. TT

Wait. The reasons he likes Molly-could they be similar to why John loves Sherlock? The three of them are odd. Anyways this is sweet and believeable! XD

You have found the heart of why I really think these two could make a go of it. Thank you!

Yes! Oh please please yes, this, just like this!

These two are SO sweet together. :) If you ever get the urge to write them again I wouldn't complain!

I am actually going back to chapter one after this to review as well because I love it so much. You've written EVERYONE so well. It's actually incredible. Typically people completely gloss over Molly- make her grow these incredible balls of steel or make her this giggling girly-girl, but you've written her PERFECTLY. And you've done quite a number with John too. With the easy humor to the "we're not gay!" to the post Reichenbach depression. The Sherlock kiss was too good too; that DOES seem like just the thing he would do.

Thank you so much for this story!

This was lovely! Ohmygoodness I want a sequel it was so good! Of course it's perfect on it's own I just want more becuase it was so awesome! I never thought I would like John and Molly together! They're so cute! And everyone seemed to be very much in character. IT WAS GREAT
Thank you! :D

Have read both chapters and had to remind myself that this wasn't a preview of the new series. You really captured Molly's mannerisms. I do think that John and Molly are missing each other in the series, each over looking the other because they are so caught up in Sherlock Holmes aura... they don't see each others... Just thinking

ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT!

Aw, this was so cute :3 xox

This is such a beautifully written story. You've created an excellent characterization of Molly as a person with social phobia, which gives this a really poignant twist. I also think you really capture both the intense guilt Molly would feel in getting closer to John, how angry John would be when he realized how much she knew, as well as how certain she would feel about being abandoned when Sherlock returned. Lovely.

Yeah they stayed together. Thank you for a great story!