Cool!

Yes! Another update. Been waiting ages and you did not disappoint. You have all of the defenders spot on with their character traits. I wonder if John Henderson will find out about the defenders staying at the castle? Great chapter. Update soon.

that was funny i laughed all they way though this chapter :) loved the part when thorne sulked, Tinkor scaring people and getting in trouble and when Skabb and crocness fighting over who won

Great chapter! Maybe you should do the next one about Kook and Shaiden on a date during the vacation. And I can't wait to see Thorne's reaction when the Defenders get back to the castle!

oh i have a feeling that vane didn't listen to thorne a few chapters ago

Hey another great chapter. I wander what Faetal is up to. Keep writing

Hey, great chapter. I've missed reading your stories. I love how you've put Thorne and Kook together. That will be be fun, well maybe not for Thorne. Keep writing

Well, Thorne's going to be pissed off when he gets back. Great couple of chapters ;)

Hi again! I've missed your writing! I recently realized that I haven't reviewed this in over a year, so I guess it's about time that I say that these are fantastic as usual! They are so funny and I wish I could write as well as you. I love how sarcastic Thorne is and I can't wait for them to reach the Atlantic Coast. I liked the ones from how they were in defender school, and that one about Kook and Shaiden's date. However, on a slightly unrelated note, I wish you would write more multi-chapter stories.

Splatalot still hasn't returned to the United States so this is the closest thing I have to seeing the show, so keep on writing!

Have an epic day!
MissCritic

Hahaha! These are fantastic! I love all the chapters, from the Kook and Shaiden pairing to Thorne's grumpiness and Gildar's hatred of sass XD In one episode of splatalot, I remember one of the hosts saying that the attackers should have attacked the castle the day behind because 'the defenders were doing the weekly shop and Tinkor forgot to lock the castle'. Could you maybe do a chapter on that? Fantastic story and looking forward to the next update :)

Haha, I liked the simplicity of this one- they act just like one big family! Great Job!

Hey, great chapter with lots of humour. Its goodto hear from you again. I have missed your great stories.

Thanks sooo much for all the hard work you put into this! Very, very good! I loved it soo much!

Hehe!
That was so good! I just love your stories so much! I liked the Hunger Games reference and generally all the humor between Ballista and Thorne!

Great. I love these splat-shots. I can imagine that Thorne will try to be over protective and stop the kissing. Keep updating