Fun!

This is beautiful! I loved it :) Some grammar errors, but otherwise, it's perfection. Haha, I love how Sherly treats Jawn like a pet at the very end xD

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I actually love the last chapter! Sherlock is really funny and concerned (poor poor John!).
thanks I have really appreciated the reading.
(sorry for the mistakes, I'm French and my English is quite bad)

This was so cute and hilarious! Sherlock so wants to prove that he can take care of John but he was going about it the wrong way XDD Anyway, I really liked this story, and I thought the way Sherlock handled John's nightmare issues was really cool as well. Dang Anderson and Donovan always getting in the way lol. Anyway, thank for another cute and amusing story )

What a fun read! Thanks for writing!

I loved this story! I think you really managed to capture the essence of their friendship in a comical way. The fact is that they aren't lovers, they are best friends. The kind that sometimes will show affection and sometimes won't, and who will be there for each other until the very end. It's a pure and beautiful friendship. I loved how you portrayed a possibility of something that could truly happen to the two, Sherlock taking care of John in a way that no one else could. They understand each other it hour having to speak out their feelings

Ahhhh bless! He really does try doesn't he.

That was great! I'm glad you added the epiloge, Sherlock's way of sending John off to bed was really funny, made me smile. He can be a bit pushy, but he can be helpful if he puts his mind to it. So cute!

YAY! Thankyou so much for taking that request seriously! FLUFF! It is overwhelming!
I love it so much! Sherlock caring for John, *sigh*... It's perfect... (slipping into happy reverie...)
THANKYOU! (:
What WOULD John do without him? Thankyou for a terrific fic!
:D
-JC

cute.

Excellent. Time to stretch yourself futher then - as you made such a good job of your first case fic!
JAL

I laughed my head off at the last line... this whole chapter was brilliant. Worth waiting for! And i was so waiting for it... Lived up to all expectations, as per usual! YAY!
Wait... does this mean this fic won't go on much longer? or that it's finished? Oh, I hope not. PLEASE DO MORE. I love this fic SO, SO, SO MUCH
-JC

I LOVE THIS!

AHHHHHH! God, this is amazing. WRITE MORE. WRITE MORE WRITE MORE.
"success rate of intervention: 15.6%"
Hahaha.
Poor John. Sally can be such a b****.
I CANNOT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER.
Get to work! WRITE!
-JC