Continuity error here, I think. Harry said he never held a sword that didn't have "Gryffindor" on it, yet didn't Elrond give him a sword before?

He told Elrond that the world he found himself in he never heard of before nor know of, yet he knew to ask for Lord Elrond when he arrived as well as knew of Rivendale?

I hate you! Unnecessary as f*ck. I hope you die!

No ropes conjoured before questioning? Not likely. Thorin and others just stand by? What a disappointing scene. Took quite a bit awsy from the whole assasination plot twust

this is really good please continue

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wasnt sauron supposed to be bodyless without his ring?
this story started so well but i found myself thouroly disapointed

but your harry is simply to stupid or incapable of doing anything, but he can conjure food which is impossible

and then when the final battle is upon them he decides to learn to use a bow and arrow. because you can learn how to use that in a few days and is way more powerfull than all his magic...
what harry is capable of should obliterate any army, master of the elements think of avatar, to top that he has magic what army or dragon (who breaths fire an element) would be able to stand against that

you make harry powerfull by giving him the elder wand early, which he never got to use and in the books would have gotten anyways. you make him an elemental able to control them all. yet so far he used 4 spells no elemental power and is as usefull as gandalf... it like taking a machine gun to arda and using it for art

Yep. Done. Out. This is absolute trash. Some of the worst writing I've seen on this site, and that's saying something. "Oh, right Lord of the Rings, sure. I read that. And now I'm living it. I wanna talk to Elrond. Amazeballz!" Lamest. Thing. Ever.

Please remove this story from the site. It's that bad. 1/10

Questions should end with question marks. "I mean" or "You see" should never appear in a story outside of quotes, because it's the author speaking to the reader. Sentences should end in periods, not be strung together with commas.

This is some seriously amateurish writing. And that doesn't even include the elder wand dodge (unnecessary since Harry got it anyway in canon), multi-elemental uber-powerfulness for no reason, ridiculous sixth sense, and unnecessary Tonks BS. In other words... it doesn't start well. Hopefully it's just that you rushed through your prologue to get to the actual story, but all the cheese you added to the prologue doesn't bode well for the rest of the story. "I mean" powerful Harry is one thing, but this is ludicrous.

This was lovely! Thanks for sharing!

Why Harry didn't just oblivate gollum about every thing?

I really don't understand why you make Harry and Tonks fall to each other only to rip them apart.. it kinda leaves a bad taste in my mouth... poor Tonks...