| Reviews for After the End |
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alive by grace chapter 11 . 5/14/2016 This was a lovely, lovely story. Thank you so much for it. |
bleeb90 chapter 11 . 4/29/2016 Absolutely beautiful. This was an amazing read! |
ThinkGeekier chapter 11 . 5/25/2013 This story and the previous one are so beautiful...thank you so much for creating this. Again...amazingly beautiful. Keep writing like this, please! I absolutely loved it. Thank you. |
Shiki105 chapter 3 . 3/1/2013 Awwwwwwww...I think this is going to turn into a trend for this story - every review from the second chapter on begins with "aww"! Lol The first chapter was definitely deceptive. I thought maybe all of it would be like that, just stating facts, never actual narrative, but you got me xD I like this. It's very sweet...in a bittersweet kind of way. Happy writing! Shiki |
Shiki105 chapter 2 . 3/1/2013 Awww! Now this is a lot better! |
Shiki105 chapter 1 . 3/1/2013 I thought I'd give it a go. Usually, though, I'm of the opinion that once something has been done, leave it well alone. The tale's finished. Whatever happened afterwards should be left to the reader's imagination, don't you think? So I don't really know what I expected to find. Something a little darker, perhaps (long live angst!) or something at least a little happy, with Thea visibly putting effort into making her life better. But this is kind of flat, if you don't mind me saying so. You responded to the reviews I sent so I thought I'd better not stop being honest now. This doesn't read very well, if you get me. It's a telling of a bunch of things that have already happened. But I'll read a bit more. First chapters can be deceptive, I know. |
Noelle chapter 11 . 1/31/2013 This story is absolutely wonderful, and every bit as beautiful as the previous one. It also made me cry quite a bit more than the previous one. You're a very talented writer, and I hope that someday you'll publish a novel and I might stumble upon it. Thank you. -Noelle |
That's MY secret chapter 11 . 1/15/2013 Oh, beautiful chapter, really. I couldn't stop smiling. |
QueenAnneMagic chapter 11 . 1/14/2013 Thanks, once again, for the wonderful story. I am crying again. The 'Always' set me off. Was it intentional? It is late at night for me, I might write you a PM tomorrow. Best of luck! |
QueenAnneMagic chapter 9 . 1/14/2013 Oh god, oh god, I have wanted to review after every single chapter, but I just had to keep reading. It is wonderfully written, as always, although I felt you were a bit awkward with both Harry and Tonks. I love it so much, and am glad that you continued it separately... |
QueenAnneMagic chapter 3 . 1/14/2013 I'm crying now, because I can feel her pain, and you projected it so well. |
QueenAnneMagic chapter 2 . 1/14/2013 I can't believe it took me all this time to find out about this... I love the fact that she didn't mope around for years after Remus and got on with her life, it's just not her, and the fact it's with Ryhs makes me even happier, he is such a good guy for her. You just build characters so perfectly and fully! Thank you! |
turn2stone chapter 11 . 1/14/2013 beautiful compilation :) |
Guest chapter 10 . 1/4/2013 I hope they still post anon reviews: I LOVE this series - i sign on almost daily looking for updates. Thank you so much: I know there is that final message coming (from Harry? My fingers are crossed that Harry lets Thea meet Teddy...) and I know I will be heartbroken all over again. Wonderful, wonderful story. |
SlytherinHouseMouse chapter 10 . 1/5/2013 Beautiful chapter, though sad; especially reading Dora's optimism, knowing how things end (though I suppose her optimism was justified, even though she herself didn't live to see it). Am really looking forward to the next chapter (even if I am fairly certain it's going to make me cry). |