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Guest chapter 3 . 10/15/2019 Thank you for the update! Good continuation! |
ausweye1 chapter 3 . 5/10/2019 Oh nooooo this story is so good! So Bad there is no next part! Anyway really loved it ! Thanks for your work ! :) |
Cafrye chapter 3 . 12/28/2018 I can't wait for the next part, really, this is a fun story. Not totally unbelievable and still has little bouts of humor that cracks me up. Thank you for writing it. |
Gracidia chapter 3 . 3/17/2018 NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU JUST NO! YOU CANNOT LEAVE IT THEREDAMMIT! |
moodysavage chapter 3 . 3/9/2017 I think I want to cry. This story is so awesome and it's incomplete. It begs for an ending. You know the derby doesn't have to be horribly detailed. It would work if the scene jumped right in the middle or towards the end of the action with Naruto's thoughts and reactions on what he'd been through so far. And both of them never wanting to go through that again after seeing what they both went through. And of course the 'I love you' scene and wrapping up the kidnapping issue. Please do consider finishing. Minimum it only needs 2 or 3 more chapters to complete (though who would complain about more). And it's pretty awesome so far. |
CrypticSilhouette chapter 3 . 11/29/2016 Fun lil fic. Although I think we both know that naruto let sasuke off wayyyy too easily. |
Kokoa Kirkland chapter 3 . 10/14/2016 Interesting AU. I never read about automotive mechanic Naruto. Really interesting. |
dontlookforme chapter 3 . 8/21/2016 Please. Please. Pleeeeaseeeee. It's been three years! Don't leave me hanging like this |
Hangelove chapter 3 . 2/26/2016 Great storyline, at first i thought it was sth to do with futurama but end up totally different story. Hope you finish it one fine day. |
phantomlady13 chapter 3 . 8/16/2015 Please say you're not leave this story hanging like this . I can't wait to see the next chaps. Cool. |
cary99 chapter 1 . 7/27/2015 Love the chapter |
Guest chapter 1 . 5/13/2015 Please update! The suspense is killing me... |
yuri lowell chapter 3 . 7/10/2014 Love this stoy so much can't wait the next update |
Princess.Yue.16 chapter 1 . 5/25/2014 I love it! Best line: " Clearly he had been too generous with his policy of straight until proven wrong." |
CrowneXV chapter 3 . 5/13/2014 Please finish |