Poor Roberto...

Well... I just finished reading you story and let me tell you that it's so messed up that I can't stop laughing. I like your other, newer stories much, much better though...

I am a die-hard Sarah/Jareth shipper. But I do admire your creativity.
That being said, I was giggling to myself that Sarah married a Latino. And that Jareth was sleeping with a half-Latina. I'm Mexican-American so that meant a lot for me. Thank You.

Love it want more of this

So... I hated this story. It was extremely well written and crazy intriguing and I was glued to it from the moment I hit chapter one. I hated it because it took over my life for about a week and it made me feel so many emotions that I am just drained. Seeing Jareth with someone who isn't Sarah was a complete departure for me and the entire time I was just screaming "NOOOO!". Luna was a good character, as were all the others, but I just am not ready to think about Jareth with someone else, it feels like he's cheating. I loved how he tried to force Luna to marry him though, that felt like something Jareth would do. I look forward to reading more of your stories!

I went from crying when Luna died to cheering when Artemis was crowned! Congrats! I hope u decide to do a sequel of some sort! Please?

Oh my I loved this story and it makes me so sad I am crying my eyes out I loved luna so much this story makes me hate jareth just alil and makes me hate sarah alot thank you for finishing it

It is well written, but it is not a really Jareth/Sarah story it's primarily a Jareth/OC story, and it's kind of misleading to mark it as such...just IMHO. The incestuous nature of it isn't really my cup of tea, but it seems plenty of people are enjoying it so good for you on your creative endeavors! :o)

Okay, for starters this is in no means meant to be a flame. Oh boy, um, I am a HUGE Sara and Jareth shipper but, this just isn't the fic for me I'm afraid. I dislike Sara in this story, I dislike Jareth and I truly cannot stand Luna. I don't think Luna is ready for adult relations and being a mother of a daughter, I would castrate Jareth for touching my daughter..not sleep with him. I don't think I could sleep with anyone my mother has slept with and as a mother no way with anyone my daughter has slept with. I like your writing style and would love to try to read something else by you.. Just not this one lol.. I hope I didn't offend you, it wasn't my intention. I wish you the best of luck with your story, as I see plenty of others have indeed enjoyed it, and I look forward to reading other fics from you.
Thank you,
Embrace the darkness within

I find your story to be really good. I like all the stuff you have going on in it and it's very creative. I do think Jareth is mental or something lacking in real compassion. I don't think he is this way by choice or on purpose. I just think he knows of no other way of being. I am sure dealing with humans and how they can be, is not something he is totally familiar with. I have felt this way about him from the first time I saw him, back when he was a new concept. Bipolar describes him very nicely. Yet, I wouldn't have him being any other way. You are doing a great job and I will be sad to see this come to an end.

just what? what did i just read? and why do i want to keep reading? L(_L) please update soon hahaha

I feel as you are trying to make me team sarah by making luna all evil like. I have to say luna being all evil like is really kinda hott in this wired sadistic way so yep still team luna.

one of each would be nice tho if only one i say a girl preferaby with jareths eyes and lunas hair...Yes but she should make him work for it and leave sarah cause all she's done is hurt everyone especially her family in her quest to get want she thinks she deserves which was jareth not even really caring overly much of what she was doing to her daughter. as for the personality change pehaps copper poisoning from where she was stabbed or mayhap it was a demonblade and some demon essence mixed with her blood or some parasite slipped into the stab wound after she passed out and was left for dead and is living in her body that feeds on darker emotions. I think Sarah will be upset whe she finds out about howie maybe so upset that she goes and looks for Jareth and finds him in a similar position as Luna without Jareth knowing causing her uncaring cheating nature to rise again

Wow I'm gone for a week and this is what I come home too! Super crazy! I hoped Luna's sudden change in behavior wasn't permenant. I can't wait until you explain what happened to her! On a side note, Jareth's back and forth emotions are giving me whip lash! I understand he's confused but if I were Sarah and Luna I'd be all "psht! we don't need this sh*t!" then walk off into the sunset together. He needs to make a choice soon before I start to get really mad haha Keep up the good work and update soon!

I am still very much team luna. Great chapter keep it up. I hope luna keeps her powers after she gives birth.