update pls

Please don't stp I love it! Best yugito and naruto build up ive read, usually it's just straight to the sex without any real thought, thank god yours came along! It's soo muchbetter and the build up just makes the ending so much better, keep it up :)

Wish I could just keep reading on and on but the chapters ate abit short :( but nonetheless great story :) 9.5 out 10
0.5 being I couldn't read more ;P haha
Love u awesome writer

Do you know that, according to the databooks, Yugito's hobby was playing the shamisen?

Eh, it's a bit long winded. Some sentences could be combined or eliminated. Some paragraphs can get their point across in fewer sentences and I think that this detracts some from the work. I'd still like to keep reading, just something for thought.

I'm pretty based towards Sakura, because of the manga mostly. She's always such a violent bipolar tomboy, in my opinion. It's weird to reconcile that with a Sakura that actually cares and is observant, as she is here.

You use "course" too much in the first half of the chapter. Still, I like uncommon pairings like this, and personally I don't think you had to mess with Yugito's age that much, but eh, it makes it a little easier :p

when is the next chapter coming out? The story is Great

Now im not saying it sucks but that got really boring.
Some paragraphs im reading just thinking dam get to the point already, it felt like we only got 1/3 of this chapter as story and the rest as random descriptive filler.
Again it's not bad just seemed dragged out to me.
Good chapter, really like the story.

curse this chapters that always seem to end too soon.
Also triple curse the danged restrictions on this site, in this case the new character limit on names.

The cake is a lie!

Wait... It turns out you were telling the truth O.O

Great story so far by the way! _

I clicked on it, yay! This was a hilarious chapter. I'm reading it at two thirty in the morning and trying my damned hardest not to wake up my roommate.

Man I am so going to use this trick you're using to get me reviewing all of your chapters in my own stories. Still doing awesome!

I really like your idea for getting reviews. Here's another one for you. I like this story a lot. But you may need to speed it up a little it goes kinda slow. You may not need as much analysis. Still very enjoyable to me though.

Awesome beginning! I'm loving the story. Veeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeerry few grammatical errors, a rarity in fanfics apparently.

Is this dead? Damn, I really enjoyed this one. It was one of the better fics. :