Great story so far! but everything's in bold. Can't wait for the new story!

Cerntinly a concept you don't see often. Keep going !

Update update update. This story is really good so far.

I love the story, will you continue it?

Hi, Ty, I am Storywriterlove99, thanks for reading my fanfic, it is my first, if you are planning on reading more thanks, but please be patient, I am new to this and trying to figure out how to put new chapters up. Love Ronnie.

Well, can't wait for that

Awesome please continue soon

hey keep going man ill deffinatly read it

I like it, the argument must of have been pretty bad for hiccup to leave for 10 years.

Also why is everything bolded?

And will you continue with this story?

A little bit confusing

Good story, interesting concepts, the only major thing that I see is that there are a few grammar mistakes. Ex. not the right words as well as a few words that are either in the wrong place or could be omitted. Again great story in the making, and I'm just trying to point out a few flaws.

this is pretty good so far. I only have a few problems though...

When Hiccup left, did the villagers know about Toothless?

If it wasn't for Toothless, wy did hiccup run away? I know it's about an arguement with Astrid, but I have no idea what the arguement was about.

How did hiccup find this village? Is he the chief or something, since he IS the one who is 'leading' them.

I hope I didn't offend you, but I'm really wondering about things here. But no worries, I think with just a litle improvement, you'lll be a pretty good writer

I'll wait for the ext chapter!