Reviews for Nostalgia
bear-kid chapter 6 . 1/31/2015
It's been three years! Please! For,all that is good and great in the world! Update! This is such a good story.
Nova Galaxy chapter 1 . 10/21/2014
2 Years! Please update. Im crying myself to sleep waiting ( ;Д)
Hannah L-Sama chapter 6 . 10/18/2014
I love it! I like the plot, I like the way you portrayed Gary in the gallery(Those dang dolls are so bipolar and confusing! Though, it's probably realistic, because I feel that stuff in the gallery is inconsistent and unpredictable). And where did the fake Garry take Ib?! That part was a bit confusing, but I'm guessing you'll most likely clear it up in the future chapters.
Criticism: The transition was awkward and sudden between chapters three and four, at first I thought I'd clicked on the wrong chapter. It cleared up after a couple paragraphs, but it pulled me out of the story and was confusing.
Violet enters the story pretty suddenly, so for her to be a significant character, I think she should be around longer. Maybe you could have it where Violet is the only maid Ib's parents kept? That would also explain why they want (trust)her to go with Ib. It's just kind of like she's thrown into the story, especially since she's introduced right before they leave.
It's help if you could add break lines between POV switches. It's a bid hard to tell sometimes when it changes, because Fanfiction doesn't let you keep your paragraph breaks(sigh) so it's sudden and takes the reader a moment to realize that we're in a different POV, and then they have to scroll back up and find out where it changed.
I Love this story though, and I can't wait to read more! I hope you update! It's been like two years, so maybe soon...? :)
Guest chapter 5 . 5/28/2013
ite been awhile...
W0lf-Spirit chapter 5 . 1/27/2013
Hoping you'll update again soon. I can't rad a story until its finished since so many at abandoned up this looks good from what I've skimmed of it so please going
A chapter 5 . 1/1/2013
Poor Garry, stuck in Guertena's exhibit.

Loving the story so far, can't wait for the next update!
koolkat4u chapter 5 . 1/1/2013
Happy New Year! Can't wait for the next chapter _ and I hope that you feel better. Chow
SuperninjaX chapter 5 . 1/1/2013
Love it! Update soon!
TheGrimGenius chapter 1 . 12/13/2012
Nice, Lovely read.
ThunderRaptor chapter 4 . 12/11/2012
This story is brilliant, please keep up the awesome work. However, the only criticism is that the character point of views are hard to follow at times.
deadlyslumber chapter 4 . 12/8/2012
I absolutely adore your writing; do continue, please! c:
Rukia Blood-Moon chapter 4 . 12/4/2012
Hey, just wanted to say that I love your story so far. I can't wait for the next update
Katerina chapter 4 . 12/4/2012
hey, just wanted to say good job on this series! i hope you can make another chapter soon, im dying to know what happens next! plz make another chapter!
Wolf chapter 4 . 12/3/2012
Just played Ib today. I instantly fell in love (not literally) with Garry. I got the promise of reunion anyway, I hope to read this soon! I can't u til it's finished or I see updates. To often I've been stuck on a cliffhger with an unfinished story. So since I'm of reviewing, I'm just givg support so that eventually I will review!
koolkat4u chapter 4 . 12/2/2012
I have a question, when you wrote about the meanings for the different type of roses did you make it up or did you look it up? I'm just curious, so you don't have to answer to this review.
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