| Reviews for The Trapped Series |
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   Circuit's Dead chapter 15 . 11/2/2014 Oh... I'm a little disappointed. I'm not going to lie, this story is what got me into fanfiction in the first place. I do understand why, though. But hey, I'm glad your still writing fanfiction and hope you keep on keeping on! Just don't keep us waiting too long! P.S. Welcome to the world of writing on tablets :D |
| zackattack999 chapter 6 . 7/9/2014 I AM HEAVY WEAPONS BOO. AND THIS...IS MY WEAPON! |
| Purestrongpoem chapter 14 . 7/8/2014 Good chapter. |
| Dude884 chapter 14 . 7/8/2014 Dude. I don't care HOW many Persona Refrences you make! IT'S AN AWESOME GAME! |
| Dude884 chapter 12 . 6/15/2014 Sorry to hear... Btw, I havenJt read TWAG yet. |
| Dude884 chapter 4 . 6/15/2014 To be fair, Big Rigs: OTRR only has 3 major problems. A. You can't ram into anything, no matter HOW hard you try to. B. Complete lack of AI, meaning you can't lose. C. Oh god. This is probably what killed it. NO speed cap on the reverse gear, meaning you can just keep speeding up and speeding up and speeding up forever! |
| Paradigm of Writing chapter 1 . 5/25/2014 Hello, Hyper! It's Paradigm of Writing. Okay, this chapter is quite interesting and the title of this chapter made me really think everyone died. I really wish I could see this original copy. Grammar is decent, some comma mistakes I think you can spot very well, and man, Pikachu is an asshole. God, you made me really hate him in this chapter. Nice breaking the fourth wall by the way. Paradigm |
| Purestrongpoem chapter 12 . 1/25/2014 Great chapter. |
| Roxasolina Lombardi chapter 11 . 12/1/2013 O.o Fox: I remember now! We're in a second story! Wow, did that moron really got smart over this? |
| Gnat1 chapter 11 . 10/21/2013 Glad to see this updated! Hmm... whatever happened to Lucas, it somehow made him smell like bacon XD Also, I'm glad to see Fox is being his lovable, idiotic self once more :D |
| Metroid Life chapter 11 . 10/21/2013 Hmm, so Fox remembers now... but it is Fox. Odds are the guy won't remember anything else, or he'll remember it wrong, who knows? Whatever the case, it will be very interesting. See you next review... |
| Purestrongpoem chapter 11 . 10/21/2013 Great chapter. |
| Roxasolina Lombardi chapter 2 . 8/17/2013 Ranboo knows too plus has a feelling about this but in the original one, didn't he help them? Derp. He didn't... |
| Roxasolina Lombardi chapter 1 . 8/17/2013 So that means pikachu knows what happened while the two other dicks don't know? Fourth wall break and meta knight didn't even noticed. |
| Plasmatroopa chapter 10 . 7/20/2013 Ahahahahaha...Pikachu, you fool...you never would have thought of act 2...so whos gonna remember now? R.O.B.? Kirby? Ness? This is Plasmatroopa, logging out. |
