When will you post a new chapter, and where is Yaya. Are tadase and amu dating in this story? So many questions wanting to ask!

Please continue with your story!

You know, you should really update your storymies more often.

good story! want to see the next!

You should continue with your story

Hi there, Nordic Twin here :)

You definitely got something good here, I like the idea. I think with a little time, it's going to be a really good story.
However, I have a few tips and a bit of constructive critism for you. You don't have to follow them, but I'm going to tell them to you anyways:
First of all, I think the story would be easier to read, if you had normal writing as the main, and use bold for POV change and other stuff like that, because it all jumbles together when it's all bold text.
Second, you use the word "then" a lot. Like with the bold, less of "then" in a story, makes it easier to read. And it doesn't hurt to have a few more words on the lines. Maybe you could describe things a little more. How the characters look when they say something, or how they react.
Third, one of the first things my beta told me, was to make a new line, everytime a new character says something. It is also something, that makes reading easier.

I really like the story so far, and I think you've got a great concept. But with a few small changes, I assure you it can go really far :D

-Nordic Twin

nice chapter i'll keep my out.
by the way if you think about it Kami is god!
and then they call her Cami-chan...

nice first story! heres a tip: you can switch the style of how you use the bold (like the main stuff not in bold and the POV and author notes in bold) but of course you dont have to take my advise...