Espero pronto puedas actualizar, es mi fic fav y el no poder tener un "final" me mata

It’s been over a year , I hope all is well With everything going on.

oh wait there was a vote ok ignore my previous comment

i must have missed this chapter's author note about you keeping it to T and yes I'm re-reading the fic again

Nevertheless i hope you will finish as planned I am losing sleep just to read finish this in a day so that must be a good thing. I really hope for them to finally be ok

is this supposed to be them legit getting together? the payoff is so unsatisfying

why can't she just straight up clarify if thats acting or not there are ways to do that without being heard like typing on the phone on the memo and then showing to one another? I was hesitant to start on this story because of the review where it mentioned that this is just angst for the sake of angst and after spending the entire day reading I feel like that's true. I could carry on till 15 or so but afterwards when there is still not much progression it's getting a bit repetitive and that's where I agree you're adding angst for the sake of it.. I need them to finally admit their feelings now! and you mentioned of planning the fic to be m rated. I hope you better keep your word to that when they finally get together. I see potential in your writing for smut I think you could write a really good one given this entire 28 chapters of build up sexual tension. You had the multiple chapters of set up , rising action and so now we better have a good payoff

Hi!
I hope all is well with you and your family during this crazy time.
I hope you update soon and finished this story, it's one of the best Jori docs I've read and re-read at least twice a year. I can't wait for them to finally for real be together

Please Updated I need more that this fic

this is getting unbearable to read. why the fuck is there so much angst?! you said we are so angry with Tori because we are getting Jades POV too, but that's a cheap copout. Tori sees Jade is serious, and has had well over 2 months to "process". it's just fake ass angst for the sake of angst, and there is only a single chapter left, and I'm willing to bet my fucking life, that you won't stop this shitty fucking "break" AT ALL! Jesus fucking Christ, nothing about this story since chapter fucking 6 or so has been JoRi

Bruh, I swear to god, if between 23 and 28, they don't stop this angst bullshit and end this "break", I'm going to lose my damn mind!

Please I beg of you finish this story I re-read this all the time and I need to know what happens! Your writing is both well voiced and well written. Please come back!

I'm not naive enough to think you'll continue the story after 1 year has passed. But even if there's a teeny tiny possibility that it might happen, that the best story I've ever read will have a proper ending, I'll wait however long needed. I understand it's difficult, but it really hurts to not have closure after reading something so phenomenal. I absolutely love every word you've written. I'd literally go 'begging on my knees' for you to finish this story. You're an amazing writer! Thank you for this masterpiece.

Please come back and finish it. The way you've written this is phenomenal. Great story i love it and am now too invested to see how this plays out :)

I don't speak English, but I hope you can understand me.
This is the best story I've ever read, and more than once
I'd love to see you so continued please
You're an excellent writer and the end of chapter 28 doesn't matter how many times I read it always makes me cry the farewell of jade and amber.
Seriously please continue the story