Nice!

Rarely have I encountered a fic that is both fun, sexy and romantic. You are awesome, never stop.

Thank you for writing this! : D

i remember this as a oneshot! and a zoluzo but now it's luzo! *,* with smex! ! ! !

whoa the two endings... fit nicely i guess

haha i love this. write more?

Zoro is not dreaming! :)

Hot fiction, and to see Zoro jealous of Law, if my favorite set-up. :)

Ha ha ha this was so cute! Good Job!

Oh... oh my. I think I'm blushing. I-I need a cold shower (and somebody in there with me). Be right back.

*FRESHLY SHOWERED* Okay. That's much better. So in case you hadn't already guessed, I thought that was incredibly hot. It's been a while since I've read some good top-Luffy and bottom-Zoro. With each other. It was short, but still great. SO STOP PUTTING YOURSELF DOWN! At least you're brave enough to post something. And it IS good. SO THERE

PIRATES OF THE CARIBBEAN! I love those movies! They're my sister's favourites, but then again, she loves anything with Johnny Depp.

The fact that Luffy bought the condoms and lube with Law... oh gosh, Luffy, really? When I think he can't get any more oblivious, he goes and does something like that. But it makes for funny story :) Cinnamon and apple though, yummy. Good taste (literally).

This is getting awkwardly long, so I'll stop here. I don't think there's anything else I wanted to say... Oh yeah! I love the last line :) It was a cute ending and tied it all up really nicely.

I FREAKIN LOOLOLOLOLOLOOOOOOOVVVEE IT! That was awesome this is my first time reading a one piece fanfic I started watching it about 3 years ago and my friend mentioned zorro and luffy and I almost screamed at her I thought she was insane but, I stand mistaken she was right this is awesome! :D

Your "The End" at the end cracked me up. ;)

as funny as this was, it was NOT mature.

Not bad! It's actually kind of cute. The beginning confused me a little, because I just really wasn't sure what was happening story was pretty obscure, but you did warn for ambiguity. It made sense to me though, as much sense as it could. However, the rest was pretty good :) Zoro's stalking seemed a little... overboard and out of character. However his brooding and bottled up feelings definitely fit. I don't pretend to know Law well as a character so it's not my place to express feelings on him. But I will say that I liked how he fit as a character. I especially like the ending. Very sweet :)

I can't- lol that's why warnings are made, read at your own risk. I love you.

wtf wtf WTF!? i want to strangle you! how the 'ell iz dat "M" for mature? my gawd my gawd MY GAWD ... ok well now that thats done, write a sequel or perish... no seriously. die.

OMG! This is awesome! Hahahah! I love how you ended it with that phrase. And I really love your choice of words. :))

Anyways...

You have a great deal of hang-over with psychiatric health (or is it your fave subject?) Are you a med or nursing student or professional? Haha! I really laughed hard when I read the splurge of psychiatric mental illnesses followed by Videbeck's name. Hahah! :))