I really like your story so far, it's great. Hopefully we'll get more of it one of these days. Take care.

Loved it want to read more

Like the story and look forward to more and the Ty Zuki sounds like a fun ship to read about if you decide on that angle but i'll continue to read this story any which way it goes.

Poor Ty Lee, I too sometimes forget she is nobility. Good to see Suki on the mend.

Thank you for the update. Don't really care how long between postings - okay so I was a bit impatient - I do respect any reasoning.

Fan Fiction taglines: where any 'ship can be sailed or a 'ship that launched a thousand writings

I like it! I'm a big Zuki shipper so I would prefer that is stayed that way, but thats me. I'm really excited for the next chapter though! Keep up the great work.

I really like where this story is going please continue already a big fan of suzuki and even ty luko and this has them both.

Aw, sensitive Zuko is sensitive. Stop trying to act all surprised that you care about your lovely lady guards! ;)

You're right, it was kind of short, but the writing was still good quality and its not like its over yet. We've got time. And if this turns into Ty Zuki I'm going to shit a chicken (thats a good thing, in this case :P).

Oh, and thanks for the partial dedication! 3

I like the chapter. I feel like you did Zuko spot on in it. He is protective without wanting others to know. Seems totally legit in the context of him.

Great job! I'm so excited to see what happens next.

Loving this. I like how you are portraying Zuko here. Something very sexy about broody Fire Lord!

he starded caring as soon as his friends became his guards. i have bad habit of talking to characters. sorry great chappie

Very nice. I hope to see more.

So Good! Can't wait for more.

Bowing deeply with respect, I say Thank You!

I am not a writer, but I try to be a good reader. Thank You for the story. I have my favorite 'ships', but what I want most is a good story. That is what I am finding here. The confrontation between Zuko and Azula is excellent. Love the ending and can't wait to have Suki wake!

is zuki counted as semi cannon? i mean suki did state that she specifically was worried about zuko (head cannons and plot bunnies have united goddamnit.) kool story