I'm sorry, but I didn't understand anything

Whhhhattt. Whattt.
Whatt.

Continue, I need to understand this.

Again, whaaaat?

This sounds super interesting, and I love the way the story is written with just enough detail that I don't feel as if it's being rushed or that's it's moving really slowly. I can't wait to read more!

Unless this came out of another story, anime or something, I didn't understand a thing of what happened at the end.
Also, there were a few parts in the middle that I had trouble knowing who was speaking, had to go back and re-read it carefully.

Other than that, it was very good, I liked it.

Interesting read, but a little forced in making it dramatic that it left me unltimately confused.