Ooerrr, it's not looking good for John. Excellent job of ramping up the tension. Another wonderful chapter.

Love how Sherlock just can't switch it off. Even though he's dealing with the case du jour, he can't stop himself from seeing everything in other cases too.
Brilliant!

Ooh the plot thickens! Very menacing. :-) Shame about the one that got away, but as the saying goes ' there's no honour amongst thieves'
An excellent chapter.

Another one that I've missed!
I am glad though that it is already complete, and obviously with it being a flashback, we already know that John is okay (phew!). An excellent start to the story. :-)

Awesome! !

John is so very protective of Kallie and at the same time the network is protective of him. :)
lol, they are recognised! :D How come everyone thinks they're a couple?
Now on to some more action!

The blushing... cute :)
I had a strange feeling somewhere in this chapter. I was reading and suddenly I found myself staring into space. I think I was unnerving the woman sitting opposite with my staring. ;) I reread the last paragraph and it said 'Felixstowe' there. So that snapped me out of the story.
Now I half hope for a great showdown in Felixstowe once the container arrives there and at the same time I hope there won't be anything happening there because I want to stick with my image of the quiet little seaside town... :D

Oh how I love that little conversation about shoes and suits :D even though I'm not one of those girls. ;) The most expensive shoes I possess are my hiking boots...
And back to 'when someone is bored John ends up in trouble'. Sherlock too, but he brought that upon himself.
Kallie is brilliant once more. I was a little afraid when she texted that strange message. John deserves a good thing to happen to him once in a while.

Well, thanks for the warning. I had just picked up something for breakfast at the main station and was planning to eat and read on the tram. So I postponed eating and was quite glad I did.
I like Donovan. :) All that confusion over Kay was a nice distraction from these otherwise grim circumstances. Do I look like a Kay? How would she know? And was she really laughing at John earlier? I'm not sure I like her. Then again the last months have taught me to be careful around nurses. Might turn into assassins at any time.

It's nice to meet Kallie again and learn she got a job. :)
But I completely disagree with beating John (and Sherlock) up. Well, Sherlock might be okay... But John's already had a knife in his leg and he doesn't deserve to be everyone's punching bag all the time... At least Sherlock got rescued.

Mycroft is all intimidating British government on the poor sod. I wouldn't want to take his place for anything in the world. I can't get over how Greg is so happy with his coffee and then Sherlock marches in and kills the moment. John makes fun of him again on top of spilling it and burning his... legs, was it? O:) And Sherlock gets all bored and solves a case in a side-glance. Everyone is at their best. :)

Hehehe. Drink your tea, Greg. Indeed! But he still offered to help them. Can't have been that embarrassing then. :D

Sometimes I think John is just as stupid as Sherlock likes to call him. ;) With all his doctor-knowledge and doctor-senses he only came up with texting Sherlock instead of calling an ambulance for himself? Because that might have helped a little. Then I see how John's thoughts had to be on Sherlock and whether he was all right so he naturally had to make sure. Sometimes it would be a lot better for him to think of Sherlock second. ;)

Oh that was so well done. I loved how the pieces fit once John and Sherlock were able to gather them. Also a great look at why our John is so necessary to Sherlock. Loved it.

Its good with good character deleopment but you need to make the plot more clear, although i have a rough idea of whats happening its a tad stringy