James is a hypocrite. And a weirdo in this. Fuck it.

ohh I think I never read something in second-person narrator which was really well done! (although I think it's a oneshot thing that could get a bit weird in a longer story, but here I liked it

:)

loved this so much

This story is incredibly refreshing (in a good way) :)

I can't even.

I have midterms tomorrow and it is much too late but holy fuck, this is beautiful. Your writing it exquisite and I love it all. Especially the lit references here and how larger than life and amazing and imperfect Lily and James are.

Loved the bit about Stacy Brown. its nice to read something that doesn't portray James as slightly cocky but otherwise so perfect he could only exist within the realm of fiction, but as what an actual 17 year-old boy would be.

cute!

This is perfect. I really love your writing style-it really is poetic (though I think I may have told you that in a review to something else you wrote.) Anywho, it's fabulous! Well done. :)

Although you somewhat didn't follow canon I loved it xD also I don't know what's wrong with me but I'm crying kthanxbye

Why don't I ever review these till later? I think I'm usually too...stricken, I guess. I always have to think about these for a while after I read them. Anyway, this is wonderful, and the description of them being high is fabulously trippy.

You write such beautiful, poetic stories and they quite literally make me ache with how amazing they are. I love your take on Lily and James in all of your stories and I love the last line in this especially. You're just a brilliant writer and I applaud you on yet another amazing story.

Love it

Holy shit I love this. It was so quirky and weird but awesome.