| Reviews for Percy Jackson The God of Monsters |
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   Callum Runchman chapter 18 . 7/23 Wait is there not any more updates? It would have been awesome to see the reactions when he awoke and I would have loved to learn what happened to Artemis' new guardian. I wouldn't have been very surprised if it was killed for no reason. I do think you could have got a relationship between Percy and Artemis if you'd let it happen which in turn could have changed a lot of points in this story. |
| eXaltTruth chapter 18 . 7/3 Guess the next story never got posted... |
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/29 Amazing |
| BM15 chapter 18 . 6/25 Please finish this story! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/6 Uhhhhhh way to many commas. Don’t usually have to say that but... Every time someone new speaks and/or a new event happens you indent. |
| someonefamous99 chapter 11 . 5/23 just occurred to me but where are the hesperides and atlas in all this, it is said that Percy's palace is surrounding the golden apple tree of immortality or whatever you call it, but the residents of the garden it was situated in were the hesperides who have not been mentioned yet which I thought was weird because they seem like the type to notice a palace in the garden they live in. |
| hlcalbuquerque chapter 2 . 5/21 What happened between Percy and Annabeth? |
| dick chapter 18 . 5/13 duck yo7 |
| AEceros chapter 12 . 4/28 This story is so shallow in concept and execution, but it just barely passes as tolerable, so I was able to tolerate it enough to enjoy it ‘til the end. |
| TheDesertFox12 chapter 17 . 3/21 The best Percy Jackson Fanfic I've seen. SO GOOD! I wish you didn't abandon this story. I would pay real money for an update. If you don't update, can you put this story up for adoption? If he doesn't, can someone adopt this on their own terms? I would hate to see this plotline go to waste. |
| TheDesertFox12 chapter 18 . 3/19 Such a good fic, sad that it was abandoned, it should be updated or someone should adopt it and write the sequel. |
| Nonces chapter 3 . 12/19/2019 Holy fucking shit are there many typing arrors in this. Not typos, but there are way too many commas in places there shouldn't. |
| ArkenX chapter 1 . 11/19/2019 I like how there are guests asking for a sequel on couple years old fanfic. |
| Guest chapter 4 . 11/11/2019 Also what's with every pertamis story I've read making artimis a freaking tsundere |
| Guest chapter 3 . 11/11/2019 In this chapter there was one major error in the fact that your scene where Percy came back from his meeting with the fates you don't have him say that it was him. You just kinda imply that everyone knows it's him when he starts speaking. |
