Wait where was the rest? Where was the finale, the new ruler being elected, the big reveal of Artemis being a mother, the reveal of Hera's son, how everyone adapts and overcomes the changes in the world and settles into their new lives?
It could literally have all been completed in 1 last chapter, even if it was a brief epilogue just round this story off

Your English is really really good

So... If I understand correctly, they think that Percy is a traitor because after he beats Gaia, she accused Percy, the person that has just defeated her, to be on her side ? And people believed that ?
... Wow I'm speechless, that sounds even more stupid now that I have written it.

Cute story. Percy power absorbing fics are a fun niche I enjoy. Thanks so much for sharing.

Also to reiterate a point from below reviewers, the entire story it's in chapter 12. It would be nice if there was a note at the start of chapter 1 directing readers to jump there.

God the unimaginative ability to kill a god and take their powers, so essentially by the time you drop this cause fanfiction writers seldom lay finish what they start he will have a crap ton of pointless abilities that take everything away from the story.

Bad stot

urm... Alaska is the land beyond the gods, but otherwise good story

Ass holl

I will fuck ur mum

I know you would be laughing seeing my username, but believe me, it's true. I am the great goddess Artemis. In this stupid out of order fan fiction, you made me love a foolish male , and believe me, I'll take my revenge. KOOLKIMOOV, BEWARE.
WHEN YOU BECOME PROUD
DO LOOK AROUND
YOU WON'T NOTICE ME
BUT I SHALL CURSE YOU WITH GLEE.
NEMESIS SHALL BE WITH ME TODAY,
ARTEMIS SHALL TAKE REVENGE EVERYDAY,
KOOLKIMOOV BEWARE
AND TAKE THIS CHANCE IF YOU DARE
YOU'LL SOON ENTER THE GHOSTS LAIR,
AND SUFFER THERE WITHOUT CHARON'S FARE.
-ARTEMIS
GODESS OF MOON, HUNT, AND VIRGNITY

When is the sequel

update please

Lol bro you goofed a little and all chapters up to 12 is on this one XD

This is really more for the reader than Han the writer. Just know that the rewritten version is in chapter 12, so you can skip the first 11 chapters. On the actual story itself, it has some contrived plot points such as why Percy was banished and how he becomes extremely powerful, but it is an otherwise adorable Pertemis story. It's nothing too serious or dramatic, and it's just overall a very fun romantic story.

loved the story!

good job