I think you should write more like this one as it is really good yet very funny at the shame time, when you can, please and thank you.

I think nature/Lucy should have remembered her memories. She was always a motherly role and she should have remembered plus now jack has to rebuild a friendship

...thanks now i want to read the next chapter its late about...2:25AM!...i hear puking...

I sure hope they get along sooner or later. I wish she could remember them being friends, but I guess they'll just have to make it work for now. This was a great story!

this was really good i remember the movie of Santa clause having Mother Nature in it ...so i guess it was only natural to put her in this story...really loved it...well probability read this over from time to time. I really hope you make more Jack Frost stories... their really good! :)

Wonderful beautiful story! Absolutely gorgeous ! I 3 this story!

I love it! faves list here it comes! : D

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Hello!

I've been reading all of your Rise of The Guardians stories. I have to say, you've a very good writer! Your stories have really good pacing!

About this story:

* I don't feel that the Chapter 1 cliffhanger was pulled off well. The dash was an interesting idea, but it left me more with a feeling of an unfinished sentence instead of anticipation. Maybe you could try something like "The struggle was painfully short."

* Could you put a warning on the first chapter that we're AU? I should have guessed it was from the comments saying 'I'm looking forward to seeing the movie', but it obviously didn't quite sink in as I spent some time trying to orient the story with the canon before reading that comment again. I'm thick -_-

* Speaking of the opening chapter, great going! It had tons of energy!

And a bad point: I didn't quite like this story as much as your other ones. I'm not sure if I can give any pointers for improvement on this front, though. I know I started to lose energy near the end. I think it had to do with me not quite liking the mechanics of this universe (ie. existing Guardians can hand over powers to anyone they want).

Like I said, this is a badly developed point (I mean, MiM made Jack in the movie, and I didn't have any problems with that). If I manage to figure out what in your writing made me start to drift away, I'll let you know. If I decide that it was just a matter of my personal preferences not clicking with your story, I'll just keep that to myself :)

Another point:

I like the idea of a previous Jack Frost (apparently, 'Old Man Winter' is from Viking mythology, which predates Jack). I think that it would be cool to see this concept integrated into the canon story - do you have something like it planned for Summer of Frost?

And, ending on a high note:

Besides of that iffy point above, I loved this story! Really, you are a great writer! The way you conveyed Jack's emotions was very well done, as was the description of the effects of losing his powers and being given nightmares by Pitch. You did an especially good job on Lucilla's outburst in Chapter 2 - it came across as genuine, when I've seen other authors struggle with trying to depict a shock-anger combo. Nicely done!

Cheers,
Redemmo

An awesome story and i think that Mother Nature and Jack Frost should get along just nicely... And jack can't have too much fun and nature should be more forgiving to jack.

excellent story. thank you for feeding my addiction

Love your story, but it is a bit "Alternate Universe". *SPOILER ALERT* Jack Frost was mortal, but he didn't really know North, Tooth, Sandy, Pitch, or Bunny. North didn't come up to him and give him the staff and such. Instead, Jack saved his sister from falling into a pond of thin ice, but fell in himself and died about 300 years ago. Afterwards, he became Jack Frost. He learns this from the teeth Pitch gives him near the end of the movie. Anyways, I love your story. :)

absolutely loved the story!

It was a good read i called pull myself away from it but there were a few point in the story were it seemed to have just jumped from one thing to another. I still really enjoyed it though... thank you

This is an awesome story! 8{D