A pleasing tale of contrasting lives and experiences on a desert journey. Keep writing, this is a fine story.

Good two chapters

It amazes me sometimes how certain things resonate with me as a reader, even though they may be unrelated. I have a slightly rueful smile at one the characteristics of Katlin, namely the insistence that "it must be so" because that was what he was taught. This rigid adherence reminds me of myself when I was younger in a different field altogether before I realised and was taught that there were other days. I guess the relative youth of the character comes into play on this.

I will admit that I am not familiar with Supernatural - it's on cable/satellite here which I can't afford so I will have to read up elsewhere for an appreciation of it, but so far, so good. I'll be following to see where this leads.

Excellent two chapters