Reviews for Finally Visible
Guest chapter 15 . 4/12
Why must it end so beautifully tragic?! Q.Q
Guest chapter 15 . 12/1/2019
You need to make more pleaseeee
Guest chapter 15 . 8/3/2019
This legit makes my soul :’D
But first Jack and Hiccup, now Jack and Hiccups son...? GO FOR IT JACK BE TF HAPPY AND GET A REST FOR GODS SAKE.
Noooo chapter 15 . 11/12/2018
I'm crying sooo hard boii! I was upset for 4 weeks and m6 parents asked wut was wrong but I didn't tell them bc they would disprove of me reading a gay fanfiction other wise I love the story...
AnxiousVirgil chapter 9 . 8/12/2018
While reading this I started thinking about the big four, you know, Jack, Rapunzel, Merida, and Hiccup. I suddenly realized something. I now found a reason why they gave that season to that person. There hair colors go in the order of the seasons. White, Blonde, Red, Brown or Auburn. Jack(Winter) Rapunzel(Spring) Merida(Summer) Hiccup(Autumn/Fall)
Dragon1315 chapter 15 . 7/12/2018
I l9ve this story, but did you have to destroy my HEART!
The end is so sad!
I'm cryin g
Brilliant writing though
Guest chapter 8 . 6/4/2018
"You must tell me all that has happened, Jack. There is little time to WASTE." We followed him as he led us back towards his workshop.
SpaceAutumn chapter 1 . 6/1/2018
I'm slightly annoyed at Toothless being called a "Pet". Mostly because I never really saw their relationship as a "Pet and owner" sort of thing, more "brothers" or "best friends".

Other than that, I'm happy and find this really cute. Though I am wary of the Jack/Pitch.
IIDaniellaII chapter 9 . 2/11/2018
I like your story so far, but the "sex" scene was horrible and here is why it was horrible: it reminded me so much of how my abusive ex boyfriend pressured and coerced me into sex when I wasn't ready. Hiccup said no and Jack got angry, molested him in his sleep and blamed Hiccup for all of it. No means no. On top of that he is crazy jealous. Take it from someone who was in an abusive relationship, this is abusive.
Guest chapter 15 . 7/21/2017
Waaaaahhhbhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh wwwhhhhhhhhyyyyyyyyyy oh wait so um jack x hiccups son? xDDDDDDDDDD
AHaddock3 chapter 15 . 11/9/2016
OhmygodohmygodohmygodohmygodOHMYGOD

This last chapter made me cry, seriously, I dropped the computer, screamed, and burst into tears.
WHY DID HE HAVE TO DIE!?

Sorry about that, it was a wonderful story, truly amazing and so awesome, just...OH. MY. GOD.
HiJack isn't really my OTP, but it's awesome and this was great.
Guest chapter 15 . 9/4/2016
You should've made Hiccup immortal! I got so depressed reading this!;( GREAT writing though. Can you PLEASE write another with Hiccup and Jack in something like Heaven? PLEASE NO! THIS CAN'T END LIKE THIS!
Guest chapter 15 . 7/28/2016
I go on the internet looking for a quick Hijack love story and I find a peace of literature that grows in its ability to reach you and in the end gives you and extesistal crisis, very very very well done!
Taki14 chapter 15 . 7/18/2016
Why? Why was this so good and that ending? I'm crying so hard, I'm getting a headache. Like. Holy Shit. If I'm to be honest, I have never seen Rise of the Guardians, but I know of Jack Frost, and I love How to Train Your Dragon, I watched it millions of timesI babysat 6 kids that always wanted to watch a movie for down time and guess what movie was always put in? Yup. HTTYD) but oh my days, this emotionally, well-done fanfic of the two worlds was done beautifully. Though, I never liked Astrid anyways, and totally pegged Hiccup as gay anyway xD
blue wolf 121 chapter 15 . 6/6/2016
I love the story sad about the ending
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