Please update, I love it

please update, it's great

Please update soon! I can't stand cliffhangers!

will you update this soon? pleeeeaasseeeee!

Oh... Megatron wants to be daddy...

Please review soon. This story is so amazing. I love ot.

I really hope u continue this. I've been following since the beginning and this story is just incredible :)

This is sooo good! You can't find many stories like this, please update soon!

It's been so long, but I'm so glad you've started on this story again! You're writing has changed compared to what it was, but even before this story was still very well written. (I sort of miss the old chapters...) Yet this is still a great story and a look forward to more chapters! Keep up the good work!

Wow...this is different

Awesome story so far, I look forward to next update and seeing how Jack and the others get out of this mess and seeing how the autobots react when they find the children.

Damn that rewrite of this chapter was a bit of a long read with the computer talk... but it was a excellent idea to put it in this chapter also nice for filling it out.
Though I must admit I kinda going to miss what you did to jack originally, it was kinda cool to have him with acid claws, but we will see were this fire ability will lead.
Looking forward to the next chapter.

This is fantastically done! You've definitely improved as a writer and this chapter is very compelling now that it's been rewritten. Looking forward to seeing where you go with this!

I am so excited to see where this is headed! I could of sworn that I had seen this already, but it might've just been the original chapters you were talking about. This is really interesting. I can't wait for more!

Wow! This is looking great so far and I hope you continue!
I'm curious as to what is happening to Miko, Raf and Smokescreen while all this is going on with Jack. Also, Megatron is acting insanely creepy and I'm wondering what his devious plan for the kids is. Nice work!