I enjoyed. Plenty. And I am amused, because we share pretty much the same taste and writing style (which is... actually strange!)
Thanks for this!

Perfect example of their relationship

I love it, you did an amazing job, not only did the words flow beautifully, but the you kept them in character, i could see this actually happening

L and Raito are my biggest OTP and this is my biggest kink 3 i love rough, cold, dark sex, there's not enough of it for LxRaito 3

Reading this again, never gets old

Rough and sexy plus Light and L is too hot to not go crazy over. Awesome job

I would say that this was very wonderfully composed, but that dear, would've been an understatement.

That fanfiction is freaking awsome. I had to stop reading every now and then to have a squeel session. Detail was the best part in my oppinion. I would have adored a flash back in the beggining. But I'm one of thoses people who need to know what the hell just happened. That was a good story, I loved it!

'makes sure he's not dead'

I'm not sure if Light will ever be able to kill L, I'm pretty sure he'll never find another gay man willing to have that kind of sex with him again... especially not one as cute :D

Very realistic. I really cannot see them doing it any other way...

...hot...i loved the dialogue! Gah good job :)

Oh my... -fangasms- I'm in love with this story! Nice, very, very nice. You're a fantastic writer. 3

Take care.

-KnotofRibbon

Great Job! This was an exceptionaly fun read...though, I doubt I'll be trying this at home lol. But seriously, nicely done!

This was just fabulous. Kinky, dangerous, heart stopping, and our incredibly sexy rivals playing an even sexier mind game.

I've read a thousand Death Note fics and some of them seem way too similar to one another. Some of them are just plain boring. But this? This is a fucking pot of gold. It has everything I look for in a fic. It's completely out there. It's raw. It's my dream come true. This is how I imagine Light and L would be if they were ever in any kind of romantic relationship. I even enjoyed the bit of sweetness at the end. Had it been in any other fic, I probably would have given the author shit for it. FIVE STARS!