Dang, this fic was ABSOLUTELY FAN-FLUFFING-TASTICK, seriously, you are a rockstar! I am beyond thrilled that I found this fic and cannot wait to read more! I loved, Loved, LOVED each of the characters you have created here along with the truly kick-ass plot line you have going! Brilliant writing here duck, truly! ;o)

This is like, the third time I read this. You can still make me exited about the next chapter

I see my previous comment would have been more appropriate on this chapter. So here it is again! A proposed new drinking game; take a shot every time you read the word sighed.

New drinking game! Take a shot every time you read the word sighed.

just found your series I read the last one first and am now starting from the beginning but I looooove it for being a good au original story.

I think you should be careful of your tendency of telling instead of showing. You have paragraphs describing Giulia's personality, and then you have Elena, Bonnie and Care being all 'You're tough, you're an alpha, Giulia' but it feels kind of hollow, because we don't really see it. People say Giulia is a certain way, the narrative describes her to be a certain way, but her actions and behaviour doesn't fully reflect that. She feels like a bookish introvert with a tendency towards self-doubt, not a tomboy who can be very feminine, and a person who is the toughest of her friendship group.

The story itself is good, but I'd recommend you keep an eye out for the whole 'what you're telling' versus 'what you're actually showing' in future works.

The only thing I disliked about this chapter were the parts that copy-pasted dialogue from the show, like "girl meets boy, girl likes boy, sex".

It just felt lazy. But the rest was really good.

There were a few paragraphs that I skipped because they were essentially describing the personality of a character, and I felt it was only telling, not showing.

So far this seems interesting. Most OC TVD fics are way too afraid of diverging from canon, and I hope that won't happen in this fic. I guess we'll see.

Oh my goooooshh I so want to see Giulia's reaction

AWWWW They are magnificent

Ooohhhh I love this story more and more. I just would advise you check the Italian. It's incorrect.

I love this book I've re-read too many time to count and I love your plot twists

Wow, I felt like... I fell in love. Whoa.

Love this!

Not to sound rude, but you are making her out to be an absolute goddess and it sort of just goes on and on and on about how amazing and wonderful she is. I think since you were trying to make it so that Elena wasn't always being fawned over, you should have made Giulia a stark contrast to her. I don't know if I'm being clear, but I just feel like it's too much, ya know?

Again, not to sound rude, but his praise of Giulia and how much he calls her beautiful is sort of...creepy, especially coming from her "uncle". Like, if my uncle treated me that way, I'd call sexual harassment.