Intriguing.

wow...that was BEAUTIFUL! it was a very interesting concept and i really liked it. it almost has a mystical feel and i loved that chakotay was the keeper of her soul.

wonderful job.

Good story. Intresting concept. Not a lot of action happening but that isn't a bad thing. This story seems to exsist partly in the past, in the Janeway's memories. I think that's why I like the first chapter better, it dealt more with her.

A short story but very intriguing. Gives me something to thik about.

I didn't like this quite as much as the first part, but still it's quite enjoyable. I like the idea of Chakotay having her soul in a rock from New Earth.

very touching.I liked it. Maybe we all loose our soul along journay of all of us have friends like chakoty to who can give it back to us

I like this, do continue. I've certainly never thought of anything like this, and I'm intrigued. Maybe she only buried her soul? She can't die like this...

Ouch, that hurts ... deep oh and it was equinox when she lost it, good paramount is so cold and evil and stuff.