Loved it! Could you do tandre "talking to the moon" by bruno mars :) I love that song.

I love Tandré, I really do, but this story was confusing. At least the way it was written. It looked like a songfic with two different person of views and it was hard to look at.

The storyline was amazing though and I wish you luck in your future endevors as a writer.

Good job! I like the lyrics to the song!