| Reviews for United |
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  DD chapter 78 . 11/14/2013 Hi! It was so nice to come back to this story and see things from Brenna's point of view! As I was reading I always wondered what this period of their lives was like. Thank you for sharing and I hope that you can continue giving us little snippets :) |
 Opera123 chapter 78 . 11/13/2013 the story needed to be told |
| DD chapter 77 . 4/8/2013 What a fantastic ending to a wonderful story! I absolutely loved United, I would check back for chapter updates almost every other day and each week you never disappointed. As sad as I am for the story to be complete, I'm so happy with how everything turned out. All I hoped for was for the father/ daughter relationship to be strenghtened, and I was jumping for joy when you finally gave that to us. Thank you for sharing your amazing writing and I hope you continue on with the stories! :) |
| Opera123 chapter 77 . 4/6/2013 Great ending. Thanks for adding the sex of the twins, I was curious. Toni and Loki I could totally see them being BFF's as my daughter would say. They do have a lot in common, being total control freaks. ha ha. I am so going to miss your updates. Hope you decide to write another project. Fan for Life |
| Opera123 chapter 76 . 4/6/2013 End? Seems like more of a beginning for Brenna and Thor. I vote for Sequel. (Ha ha) Maybe you need a break from this monster story that has been a real pressure to read from beginning to end. Thank you so much with sharing your talent with me. |
| Opera123 chapter 75 . 4/6/2013 Loved the description of Brenna embacing the power within her. I have relieved that Loki and Brenna were in fact able to save themselves a little with some help form the avengers. SO HAPPY TO SEE YOUR UPDATE SO SOON. THANK YOU! |
| Opera123 chapter 74 . 4/5/2013 great chapter you are killing with the waiting to see what will happen next |
| Opera123 chapter 73 . 4/3/2013 great chapter, things are always getting more tense Looking forward to reading more about stark and loki together I would love to see a little of the big bad loki again, but not sure if it would fit into the story. As always can't wait to read more. |
| Opera123 chapter 72 . 4/2/2013 So Brenna and Loki are feeling the love for one another and all it took as being kidnapped and being experimented on. I hope the rest of their relationship goes easy after this because if Loki has a midlife crisis it just might kill them all. Love the chapter, feeling sad though because I know the end is near and I will miss seeing your updates. Seriously looking forward to Loki kicking some ass though. |
| Opera123 chapter 71 . 4/1/2013 When Loki does reach his breaking point again in his life, I would not want to be around. The last time he reached that point bad things happened. Awsome chapter again, good dialog and details about what the facility looks like. Cannot wait for more. |
| Opera123 chapter 70 . 3/31/2013 great chapter. Congratulations, I believe you have the biggest Loki Fic on this site. |
| Opera123 chapter 69 . 3/29/2013 finally father and daughter have made amends great chapter |
| Opera123 chapter 68 . 3/28/2013 love the way you heighten a story, brings a real thrill to the reader |
| Opera123 chapter 67 . 3/26/2013 Amazing chapter. I love the dialog between Brenna and Azazel. Proud of Brenna using her gift right away on demand. Curious though, did you google or read the comic about Azazel being the father of Nightcrawler? Please update soon, you have me hanging on the edge of my seat. |
| Opera123 chapter 66 . 3/25/2013 from out of the pan to into the fire goes the Loki family I am curious how much Brenna is like her big daddy when it comes to rage |
