Reviews for In heat
MagnetaTronis chapter 3 . 10/12/2019
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In heat chapter 4
Goddamn it if she won't finish the story, then I WILL!
IT'S BEEN TOO LONG!

Prowl slowly ran his tongue along Bumblebees panel. Bumblebee shuddered, his sweet yellow chassis trembling against his true love. Prowl looked straight into Bumblebees beautiful baby blue optics. " Are...you ready? " He asked gently. Bumblebee silently nodded and smiled shyly at him. Prowl smiled at his bondmate gently and whispered :"I love you. " Tears streamed down Bumblebees face as he replied, "I love you too." Prowl ran his hands across Bumblebees sensitive body. Bumblebee opened his panel for the Ninja -bot. Prowl smiled and gently inserted his spike into Bumblebees valve. "A-a-ahhh!" Bumblebee whimpered in both pleasure and pain. He was, as Sari would say, a virgin. Untouched by anyone..His seal was still intact. Bumblebee could feel his seal tearing. That was where the pain was . He thought he could handle it, but the deeper Prowl pushed into him the worse the pain was, until it was unbearable.
"Prowl stop. Stop!" Bumblebee whimpered.
Prowl stopped instantly. " Are you okay? "
"No, it hurts. I don't want to do it anymore!"
Prowl removed his member from the young bot and helped him to close his panel. He took Bumblebee in his arms and gently rubbed his back.
"Are you sure?"
Bumblebee was sobbing so hard he couldn't speak.
"I'm never going to be rid of this heat cycle! You were so gentle with me, but I couldn't even enjoy your love. What's wrong with me?!"
Prowl thought for a moment. "Nothing is wrong with you, Bumblebee. I'm probably not the best person for you to have your first time with. Maybe you should try a femme instead. We have a new female member on the team. She likes you. "
"What's her name?"
" I think it's Magneta. "
EHEHE! I put myself in the story!
"You really think she'll help me ?"
Prowl smiled " Check your phone. "
Bumblebee pulled out his cellphone and listened to a message that the new girl had left him.

Hi Bumblebee! It's Magneta,the new girl. I heard you were having a heat cycle, and I was hoping that I could help you out. I know you like Prowl , and I hope that you and he work something out. But if it doesn't work out, you are always welcome to come have sex with me! Oh! And I sent you some naked pictures of me to get you interested. Come find me if you need heat cycle relief when Prowl isn't around. By the way, this offer is for you and you alone. Unless you and Prowl want to have a threesome. ok love you!

He and Prowl looked at the naked pictures she sent him.
"Damn, her breasts are huge..." Bumblebee mumbled.
"She has a nice valve too...Prowl muttered.
" What is she , a cat? Look at that tail! "
"I wonder if it's prehensile."
" Wanna go frag her with me?"
"Nah, you need her more than I do."
"...kiss me?"
Prowl smiled and gently pressed his lipplates to Bumblebees. Bumblebee kissed him back and pressed against him tightly. They made out for several minutes before Bumblebee decided he wanted to try again with Prowl.
" Lay down, I want to try again with you. "
"Later, go have sex with Magneta."
Bumblebee hugged him tight and silently stepped out the door.
" I love you, Prowl. "
"I love you too Bumblebee. We can try again later, okay ?"
Bumblebee nodded and walked toward the room of the new girl.
Nadaka tsuskiyam chapter 3 . 2/3/2019
Update! Plz!
Guest chapter 3 . 11/1/2017
Waaaa please make 4 I can't wait any longer! Reads all over again ugh still needs 4 lol
TheGreatMilica chapter 3 . 6/9/2017
C'mon! Finish this chappie pleeasse! I love it!
Eclipse chapter 3 . 3/23/2017
This is getting rather interesting. I like the cliffhanger you did there.
ShadowPhoenix121 chapter 3 . 9/25/2016
Please do more.
TFfangirl11347 chapter 3 . 8/26/2016
Noooooooo you can't end it like this... :'( ...more plz plz
Madiecats chapter 1 . 8/14/2016
Sweet stuff. Loved it.
Guest chapter 3 . 5/1/2016
It's been like four _YEARS_ since you started this story so _PLEASE_ write the next chapter before I metaphorically gorge my eyes out! :(
deviishangels chapter 3 . 11/26/2015
omg
i love it
especially the part where others start to get aroused when around a bot in heat
guest chapter 3 . 6/28/2015
Come on moorree please
Guest chapter 3 . 5/22/2015
Make the last chapter. Come on! Its been like this for months now!
skyice98 chapter 3 . 4/23/2015
great fic. I hope you continue the story.
Bumbleprowl chapter 3 . 2/15/2015
Dude! Two years! That's so not fair! I'm gonna die!
xxxxBumblebeexxx chapter 3 . 1/23/2015
Write more i like this shipping
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