Vapor,
I absolutely love this! The idea of Arthur being only mostly clueless, but understanding Merlin's conflict is there even if he doesn't know the what or the why is one I've never read or thought of before. Great Job!
God Bless,
Auua

This is what should have happened in the series.
I can't believe Arthur would be so oblivious not to realise what Merlin was doing.
Great story.

Awwww, this is perfect! I really think that this is entirely possible.
I love the way you really got the characters down amazingly well and the banter between them is great.
Poor Merlin :(
I too have noticed the amount of conversations that out two favourite boys have that hint that Arthur knows a little more than he's letting on. Unless he really is that oblivious xD
Keep writing
Love Tibbins xx

Series! Series! Pleeeease!

Very good

So good!I love it how both Arthur and Merlin struggle with their inner thoughts.I felt sad for poor Merlin,though,,just like in the series,he SO much wants to tell Arthur,but the time is never right!
Could you consinder to continue this and make it series?