I thought it was awesome

Lol... Typical Ash... :D

But anyways, this was nice and comical! I'm always a sucker for humor... For a minute, I thought that Ash would admit his undying love for May, but... I was wrong. :P

"May watched in awe as Luvdisc jumped in and out of the water like DOLPHINS." I loooove dolphins... I flipped out at that part... XD

Great job! I loved this story from beginning to end! You always find a way to include a hint of sweetness throughout the story... Can't wait to read more from you! :)

It is a great story! Though I hope the next one won't be so short. Still, I thought it was cute. Keep up the great work.