| Reviews for The heart of a knight |
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V0uki chapter 1 . 8/18/2018 aaaahhhhhhh I absolutely love this story! The plot is exceptional and your Bulma is truly amazing. I hope you'll update it someday. Most importantly, I hope you're well! :) |
SereStarOfGaea chapter 11 . 11/7/2015 I really hope you update soon.. This is a really interesting turn off events! I like the idea of having sort of backflashes of the future even though it sounds dumb hahahahaa.. I how the changes that are made are good ones that instead of leaving things like they are, it changes them fire the better.. Like vegeta going super saiyan now, not leaving Bulma to train, no brainwashed vegeta .. You know, changing the cannon version to give us something new |
LovedHopelessRomantic chapter 11 . 8/1/2013 OMG. I love it! like real true love lol. Keep up the great work |
AmeliaJade326 chapter 11 . 4/11/2013 I really hope to see an update soon! I love this story! |
Nicely.done.doctor.who chapter 1 . 4/7/2013 I'm so glad I found your story, It's so hard to find a good Dragon Ball fanfict, specially one exceptionally good as yours. |
rychefan chapter 11 . 3/29/2013 absolutely the most amazing story i have read so far WOW! can't wait for more thank you |
HISTORY83 chapter 11 . 3/22/2013 Je me demande ce que fait l'autre Végéta et comment vont se passer leurs rencontrent ? Sinon , la suite s'il vous plait j'aime beaucoup votre histoire ! HISTORY 83 |
Trunksmybaby chapter 11 . 3/22/2013 always! so tearful.. I loved it.. and the sex scene was pretty hott too by the way |
beautiful-note2895 chapter 11 . 3/21/2013 this is a great chapter i was confused about the goku seducing bulma but I love this story and is present vegeta going to meet future vegeta can't wait for the next chapter... |
nancy103 chapter 11 . 3/21/2013 Fantastic update! Thanks for posting! |
smalsa chapter 11 . 3/21/2013 An update! It seems all my favourite stories are being updated...I feel so spoiled right now lol! "oh my god, woman!", firstly I hope die hard BV fans don't give you stick over the whole goku thing! I admit I was wtf defuego really? How could you? But I knew better! I knew you would never, ever have those two together..it's a crime and plus this is a bv fic! So when he all of a sudden morphed into vegeta, I thought okay maybe this a dream? But one better, she was drugged...that made sense! A great move! Now that I've read the whole chapter, I have to admit I loved how that dream was written...it really shows that vegeta is the one she wants! Bringing Zarbon into this was epic, I loved it! And having him 'killed', well more like captured by vegeta again...well that has got to suck! Oh man, I loved the dramatic scene exposing vegeta, is there any other way for him to make an entrance? It was amazing, I loved the fact that he is so possessive over her and so proud of the fact that she is his wife...and you wrote that perfectly...all the arrogance and gruffness was there; it was so vegeta, well done not many people can pull that off! The last line was beautiful, what a way to end a chapter! I can't wait for the next chapter, are they all going to meet up...whats going to happen...I'm dying to know...as always and amazing chapter! |
threeam inkblot chapter 10 . 3/1/2013 i hope they find her. more pls;) |
Batgirl chapter 10 . 2/28/2013 Awesome chapter. I like how you mix up such funny moments with reflections on how characters develop! Future Vegeta is to die for. |
KasumisMom chapter 10 . 2/27/2013 Another great chapter. This is a very interesting, slighlty AU story. I may have missind something, but I thought Bulma lost her hand on the ship with future Vegeta after she left Goku and the others on Namek. So Goku and present Vegeta dont know about that yet to mention to Turles.. |
HISTORY83 chapter 10 . 2/27/2013 Je suis votre histoire depuis un moment et je ne me lasse pas de relire les chapitres depuis le début . Mes félicitations . Une question : Que devient le Végéta du futur ? Va t-il faire intervenir dans sa propre vie ? Le suspense est intenable ! HISTORY 83 |