(2nd review since i screwed up the first) Nearly 3 1/2 years later this story is such a wonderful and enjoyable read! The almost constant ebb and flow of the pacing, slowing down when needed and speeding back up is great, and the small descriptions that really make it full of life. I love the attention to details about each character, really bringing out their development and their unique personalities that make you just fall for them (especially Ril). My only real critique is the occasional misspelled work, and the occasional misplaced quotation mark, which can make reading conversations a bit confusing to read. Otherwise a great and enjoyable read that can be read over-and-over again, and will be. I hope that with the impending release of ME Andromeda near that inspiration to continue this beautiful story will happen and we can continue on the ride with the adventures of these human-quarian lovers!

Even after almost 3 1/2 years after the last update, this was such an enjoyable read! I really wish there was more and it was updated. The character development was great and the constant attention to all the little details that really make the characters stand out and build to their personalities! The only complaints I have were the occasional misspelled word, which happens to the best of us, and the misplaced locations of quotation marks that occasionally made conversation a little difficult. Otherwise, a wonderful and an emotionally filled story that can always be greatly enjoyed and read over-and-over. I hope that with ME Andromeda on the verge of release possibly inspires the continuation of this fun story. I would be very enthusiastic to see it continued.

Very nice story, more chapters.

I read this story and still do pls update

This is officially going into my list of fics that I'm following. XD

Still enjoying this story. Sad that it has gone so long without updates.

I liked your short story there. Very good. It'd almost flawless. In the eyes of the reader literature not of their own is perfect

Damn that was good. Never too much cuddling

I really enjoy the quarian and human romances other that that mainstream tali and shep. I hope this story isn't over

I like your stories, and I really like your writing style. 'Courier' is something I know I'll remember for a long time. Love these characters and the pace you set, the detailed descriptions, I can't pick a favorite chapter... I enjoyed every word, and I hope to see you pick it back up. Please write more!

I really enjoy this story but thus part is really confusing. So is the past between Ril and Fredrick changed or what? anyways hope u continue on doing what your doing and please try not ti change the past. To confusing for me.

Onve again, a spectacular chapter!

Really happy to read more of these two... I'm such a sucker for quarians... Love it. Hope to read lots more.

i really liked this one, it showed just how devoted Fred is to Ril.
A quick question, and comment, though.
Was the woman who fired Ashley?
And you should have put some line spacing between the shift in perspectives, it got a little confusing for a moment.

As always sir, your work is amazing. Don't you dare not finish this story!