really nice reading for me... thanks for sharing this piece... it's really unique... but it gave me my une/treize fix. Thanks for sharing and please write more of Une and treize.

This story is wonderful! Beautifully written and wonderfully in character. Great job :)

Kami-sama... that was so well-written! I really enjoyed it! I love how you went deep in to these characters and made them so real... I mean, as if they really existed... I don't know, maybe I'm just blabbering, but the story gave me new insights... And I felt sorry for Nichol - relating to him a bit more than others. p Heh, well it's really good. You're an awesome writer.

Aww man, I'm sorry but that ending... That is just vicious in its own way... you so have to write a follow up story That comes later on and things finnally get resolved or something, anything!

need any ideas I got plenty.

Hmm... Well, it is somewhat reminiscent of "War and Peace" by Leo Tolstoy. Une/Anne reminds me of Natasha, the heroine. Treize and Une are my favorite characters; they are simply more complex; hence, the examination of their past is fascinating. Congragulations!

That was gorgeous. I was not quite sure if you would be able to delve into the relationships of the characters and not make the story rushed. But it came out beautiful. Poignant. I've always liked Une's character. You did a wonderful job melding a dominant spirit to a rather pathetically loyal character. I love it!