Awww

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww oh my gosh that's so cute!

i'd just like to say d'awwwww. my goodness fanfictions for games like these really need fluff else the world would be depressing. i like the ending; reciprocated feelings ftw!

i'm just . . . my geography might be a bit off but isn't the Cheyenne nation just a bit way too far west? unless that's her mother's name, then ignore, plz.

Loved it! It's nice to find such a nice OC instead of a super powerful and skilled assassin Mary Sue. Connor is also in character and SO SO SO cute during the whole thing. Amazing work!

He's so CUTE! -

AHH! I LOVED IT! Pure perfection! BRAVO!

All mah feels.. they're melted into a little puddle. I loved that :D *squee* so perfect :D

D: wow that was...meooww!3 can't wait!_

Yay! :D I loved this! You did it well, conner was in character, its nice to see that... Lol conner's so socially akward.

Gah! This was too cute!

The whole time I was like, "Just kiss her already! Don't drag it out!" But I'm glad you did, it really made it all the better.

Please write some more! You write very well and it'd be a shame that such talent go to waste! Too often people start stories in here that never finish when the people of the interwebs clearly want more.

Do it! Do it! Don't drag it out! ;)

Wow this is wonderful. Connor is such a great character and Ivette is amazing as well!

So fing cute!

This one shot was too perfect... XD

He tasted of the rugged earth o.o Has he been eating dirt xD? Just kidding, this one shot is so cute! Connor had a lot of confidence in this and Ivette's description sounds beautiful.

Very well written. I think your character sounds interesting, another Native American Half-European but from a different tribe.

I think your portrayal of Connor was especially Good. I think if he was to have a relationship with a girl, I think it would most likely be something like this. Haha XD