deberias continuarlo me gusta como naruto se desarrolla en esta historia, mas adelante deberias hacer que algun yonkai vuelva a naruto a la edad de cuando era genin así se le daría una oportunidad a yukari; tsukune parede el tipo de una sola chica o podrias agregarle a ruby (kokoa es opcional) seria bueno mas adelante que naruto le cuente a kurumu como parecia que nunca tendria a alguien que lo amara y cuando al fin lo tubo con hinata y shion al ser petrificado nunca experimento lo que es tener una familia y asi kurumu empiece a tener sentimiento por el, con S -moka podria interezarle despies de kuyo y que al fin acepte esto cuando naruto se emfrente a su padre

This is such a cool story! Please update soon.

So naruto can squish mikogami easily but he can beat three fricking retarded weaklings. What the fuck.

love this fic

a good fic for someone who finds it hard to do future fics i will not try and rush you i just hope i do not have to wait months to see update anyway good job

I wish to read more into this ik writing it's a very timely thing to do for u and I only hope the next chapters are even better then the last keep up the great work! :D

i like the story
very interesting

It might just be the cliff but I kind of hate ya right now with that cliff in its self. Hes pissed enough for makas that"Crying in corner" now ill miss it.

Cool story continue please.

Cannot wait to see more.

Wow.. Love this story
Keep up with your good work

lol, just a retelling of the series... SOOOOOO original...

Don't have a ps4 yet? 0.0

Really good please update soon

continue. i want to see ruby see exactly what she unleashed.