Woah... palmer u have been recked
Sorry 4 ur defeat but it twas inevitable
So have a bad time.:)

Excellent work so far I say but yes you're right I'm trying to figure where you are trying to go and I am not successful.

Yay
Can't wait for it

A bit of an odd way for Anakin to act, especially since one of the most important things to him is family and while it helps the story it just seems out of character for him to goad someone who just lost a family member into a fight like that, and then attack them afterwards. Don't get me wrong though I only meant it being strange before he fell to the darkside but it just rubs me the wrong way a tiny bit. Otherwise this is a great story and I will definitely continue reading!

Please update. Also question, why do you say, "my bitches" at the end of all A/N? Also I am saying this, thank you for your service in the military

DAMN If an odst can do this I can't imagine the spartans. they would slaughter the jedi and sith.

I am confused on why the ODST's wife would say hello to Asoka. She is not human and don't they still think that they are at war with aliens?

I was wondering if you were going to continue this story? I think it is really good so far!

good luck to you, Sir

I'm not getting on your case or anything, but the chief seem uncharacteristically human

believe if you had action in every chapter I wouldn't bother reading the rest of the story

Why all the hate for Palmer, you make her out as a super bitch. But you forget, Halsey KIDNAPPED CHILDREN AND TORTURED THEM, hell by all rights Halsey should be dead, LONG before 4. And if Halsey was working WITH the enemy, given what she KNOWS, AND IF YOU'RE UNDER ORDERS! One life, vs. possibly all of humanity's? I'm sorry, but I'd go after Halsey too.

Oh shit Marcus vs Palmer!

Have to agree with you about the fake Spartans.

Very good asshole skywalker idea.