"Shinobu slowly opened his bleary eyes, pulled out of his doze by the gentle clinking of cups and plates bumping lightly against each other. He stretched his cramped muscles, glanced at the clock and saw that it was already nearly 9am on Saturday morning and peered around to find the source of the noise. He was bowled over with surprise when he found out: Miyagi had for once taken the initiative and was bringing in breakfast in bed! He gave his older lover an appreciative, if somewhat bewildered, expression as he took the proffered tray." ... Realistic. Ab initio, this was the first word that popped up in my head. Your creative acuity created a flexuous and suggestive story; besides, Shinobu and Miyagi are wonderfully in character.

The setting you have chosen is fantastic, this German Christmas Market looked amazing thanks to your descriptions. Here in Italy we have similar markets at Christmas, so ... everything was quite familiar to me (and god, how I love these places ). This fiction is nothing short of awesome, believe me _ every single bit of it was spectacular (kiss included)

Diese Geschichte ist super. Du hast Talent. Danke _ ahaha my German sucks :'D

Yo! Me again... I love this 3

Uma linda historia. Parabéns Um toque bem sútil de sensualidade e delicadeza. Sou brasileira e particularmente muito fã de Junjou Romantica. Gostei muito da forma como escreve, objetiva e claramente. Espero ler mais de suas histórias. Beijo.
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A beautiful story. Congratulations A very subtle touch of sensuality and delicacy. I am Brazilian and particularly a fan of Junjou Romantica. I really liked the way he writes, objectively and clearly. I hope to read more of your stories. Kiss.

now that was sweet... i like this couple for some obscure reason

Kyaaaa! That was so fluffy! That was the cutest terrorist oneshot I have read so far and I real junjou fanfiction like I sleep lol anyway fav! Loved it :D