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This was so cute, almost awakward like a real first time lol
The crown is a perfect ending, even if it makes me wonder where did he find it ( he had it all this time? Well, he did have his uncle's sandal...)
Amazing work ;)

awwwwww

this is an instant favorite.

the emotion between the two - yes!

the description of them coming together physically - wonderful!

my demand - a follow up!

I loved this so much. This pairing didn't even cross my mind, but PHEW WAS THAT HOT!

*uncontrollable fan girl squeels*

How well written and full of emotion this was. I loved how you made Zuko inexperienced. It made it all more realistical.

A sequel, I need it. Beautifully written. Thank you. _

SEQUAL SEQUAL SEQUAL!

Wow, beautifully done! I don't know what it is about this oneshot, but it seems so real. It was just...very nice to read. The lemon was well done, but it felt more intimate and you could tell just how much love's involved throughout the whole thing. And this part:

"And what about me? Do you love me?"

She hesitated only a heartbeat before she answered, raising her gaze so she could look into his eyes.

"Exactly in the way I shouldn't."

It just KILLED ME! Gah, so nicely done! /applauds

Ha! I just knew it was a reference to the song from RENT as soon as I saw it! (: and thats why I will immidiately start reading it.

I love this story, it was really amazing... Especially good for a first lemon scene. Good job. :D

This is such an amazingly well-written story. Like others have said, I, too, would be very interested in reading about the others' reactions-especially Aang's reaction to Zuko and Katara being a couple. You definitely should write a sequel, if not a trilogy of sorts. You definitely have the skill... Just a thought. Great writing, though. Seriously. :)

I love this! It's so beautiful and so amazing well written. Zarata should have really happen and not Kataang!

awwww :)