Is that it ! Will you update for more than a prologue, cause this story, with this begining, has a lot of potentiel.
Hope you will reevaluate your decision and continue this story. I can't wait to read more.

Thanks for reading my review, God bless

Lynda

IT SAD AND HAPPY THAT SHE GOT JASPER FOR MORAL SUPPORT.

This is really good

Awesome can't wait for the next chapter

great one-shot! :-)

Waaaaayyyyyyyy too fast! C'mon, you need to describe things to the readers man! I feel like I'm blind here!