Reviews for What Should Have Been
Guest chapter 1 . 7/4
Just another stupidity, moron not been a Moron stupid. Gay Draco been a Moron as usual with no consequence more stupidity dead story moron writer equal stupid full of crap story
halcumbie chapter 13 . 4/5
Great story! When will you decide to finish it?
Corwyn chapter 13 . 2/12
I'm loving this story so far and hope you get a chance to continue it. Thanks for sharing it with us.
Bill Lewis chapter 13 . 7/3/2019
The NES ordered from the states probably would not work in the UK. The television system in the UK is PAL while at that time the US used NTSC. They are not compatible.
While looking through the book that Hermione made for him, he realized that the people were direct DESCENTANTS of his...his children and grandchildren? I believe that the word "ancestors" would be more appropriate.
tyrannicpuppy chapter 13 . 1/29/2019
Such a brilliant story. Wish it were complete.
tyrannicpuppy chapter 4 . 1/28/2019
Utterly adorable. Love it to bits. Shame it is abandoned. Looks to be really good.
Msmalloryreads chapter 13 . 1/25/2019
I love this fic. I wish it had been finished.
Sixstringsamurai83 chapter 1 . 12/28/2018
I really wish your would pick this story back up I think you were doing quiet a good job
Currahee506 chapter 13 . 11/23/2018
update please
Deathcrow chapter 7 . 7/12/2018
Aaand here we have the "You're now legally married" bullshit chapter. Why do soul bond fics insist on (legally) marrying underage children? I have to assume it's part of US puritan culture, as an effort to legitimise the intimacy between the soul-bonded couple. Can't have them sleep in the same bed or later have sex without being "married", that would be just indecent and upsetting, right? What is the purpose of this? Why can't the bond exist separately from the legal recognition of their union? Why take that decision away from them? Maybe Hermione would have wanted to keep her name, or become Hermione Granger-Potter?

It also really trivialises the bond if the big shocking reveal is that they are now married. Who in their right mind would care about that piece of legal fiction at this point?
dalyscott5 chapter 13 . 6/21/2018
" I don't know when the next update will be, but it shouldn't be as long as this one took." True to your word I see, haha. Seriously though, good story so far, have to say I am enjoying it, can't resist a soul bond fic. Hope you haven't completely abandoned the story.
takanis chapter 1 . 5/30/2018
Great story. Can't wait for your return to writing and continuing this story.
Osmodious chapter 13 . 5/13/2018
As with your other story, I’m sad that this appears to be abandoned...it is quite good. You have an interesting take on the whole ‘soul bond’ thing, and the story felt like it was heading in interesting directions. You write very well...along with many of the little things that make a story good, you just, well, write well. You pull the reader in, make them care about your characters and wish to see what happens next. Thanks for posting, and please come back and finish these stories some day!
Guest chapter 6 . 1/20/2018
Great
Guest chapter 5 . 1/17/2018
Good
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